rate_review Reviews

You are awesome....I love the storyline and I got all giggly as reading. PLEASE WRITE MORE AND SOON!!! I am on this site like...most of my time everyday!!! PLEASE!!! BTW My fiance...well...He\'s a blonde green-eyed Snape...Seriously...It\'s hard to resist reading these stories about S and and Hermione for me....WRITE MORE AND SOON!!! :)

Great fic.
Can\'t wait to read more of it!
~Tikina~

I think your story is wonderful....I suspect Hermione is a little (or a lot) in Love with Severus as it is.....which is why she was the discussion held in a few months.....and I can\'t wait to see what happens next.

Something is wrong with your punctuation marks. All the \' and \" appear as ? on the fic. I am no computer type person so I have no idea why it is doing that. Your fic is the only one that does that.

OK, that aside it is an interesting idea but I think you ought to flesh it out more and slow down a little in your writing. I tend to rush in my fic as well and it can be tough. I have rewritten my first couple of chapters several times already (and plan on more). Don\'t get frustrated, you are doing fine. Just every once in awhile as you add chapters take a look at the previous chapters and see what you can do to make them better. Gradually, it will become easier for you and your fic will become better as you go.

Keep writing. :)

oh! You should *definitely* \"bother\". LOL A unique beginning is a prize thing in fandom -- something you\'ve managed to do. Besides, that\'s an evil little cliff you\'ve left us with. LOL It\'d be unusually cruel punishment to leave it there. ::grins::


Kiri