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for A Fool\'s Prophecy

by Angel7483

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 6... I really like what Severus is willing to give to Hermione & I can\'t wait to see what kind of questions she will be asking him!!! Will she be gifting him again with her not taking the potions that he gave to her? Til chapter 7, Deb >^..^<
person WizardingAngel
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooooooo evil cliffhangers...................... but I like where this is going and I hope to sere are and as always keep up with the great work
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 5... I just love how Albus sees through Severus!!! I think it would work either way, either do both OR just go to the wedding night with discussion or even thouughts of the wedding.
I look forward to your next chapter!!! Til then, Deb >^..^<
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I look forward to new chapters soon.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 1-4... I do like your story so far, good story line!!! I am looking forward to the wedding & the wedding night!!! Til chapter 5, Deb >^..^<
person WizardingAngel
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aha the plot thickins lol this such a great story I can\'t wait to find out what haoppens................................. keep up the great work
person ran
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Prophes a s a verb. You want \"prophecy\". Having a misspelled word in the title is a turn-off, you better fix it.
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a t stt story so far. Please update again soon. I LIKE IT! I LIKE IT!

Tiffany
person tammy
schedule January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very exciting so far, I love the HG/SS weg stg stories, especially where both have had no relationships prior. Please say you will make Severus a passionate lover!! Can\'t see him any other way!!

Waiting, Waiting, Waiting! :))

Tammy
person Topaz
schedule January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know why, but I love the HG/SS fanfics where they are forced to get married. Since they are both very stubborn intellectual people, the only way that they would admit their feelings is when they are obviously cornered with facing each other on a daily basis. Good story and I look forward to more chapters.