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you have a great grasp of hermione. i\'m jealous. i would like a great grasp of hermione too. hehe. um, anyway, stick to the subject. that was a great chapter. i really like how comical and fun this is. it was especially hilarious when hermione asked the boys if they wanted to study and then turned to ginny and crossed her eyes. priceless. and i\'m glad there will be more girls in the coven. it would be kind of small with only two. i can\'t wait for more. keep it coming.

Loving this fic!!! Keep writing--can\'t wait for more.

um, are they stealing the powers of these wizards? By duplicate does that mean increasing their own power at the expense of the other? I don\'t think that\'s what you meant, but I wasn\'t positive. I figured the gift for a gift meant that it was a benign spell. Anyway, looking forward to finding out where you go with this. I am really enjoying this.

well look who is getting into the writing game. and it\'s starting off very well. i like the idea of the story and it\'s pretty cool about the spell and all, but i\'m curious about who else might be in the coven. you should add a few more witches. they don\'t have to be major players but a few more people could spice up your story. i have just the tiniest problem with your dialogue. it might be just me but i think that most people, even fictional ones, would use contractions, such as using i\'m instead of i am. the dialogue sounds a bit stilted otherwise. can\'t wait for the next chapter. i\'m very curious as to how you will handle the seductions. hehe.

I love this story. Great story line. Love it that Ginny has noticed Snape noticing Hermione. Can\'t wait to see where this is going. Is Ginny going to seduce Harry, or are there already feelings there for them too? Anxiously awaiting updates.

Jen :)

This is really coming together well. Great job! I have another chapter to read! LOL!
LB

Interesting little twist there about the coven. So, where are we going with this? Does this mean they need to have sex with lots of men, or do they find their soul mates, bond with them and use the power from the bonding for the coven?

Hmmm...I look forward to reading more,
LB

No disrespect taken at all. Even better timing would be Beltane, but it\'s too far away for your story. Deb, every tradition is a little different as far as what it takes in and what it uses. I\'m not a practitioner of wicca - I\'m a hereditary Green Witch. Our traditions vary slightly to greatly from Gardnerian Wicca. Keep doing what you\'re doing and remember, fiction is often thinly veiled truths follwoing the author\'s agenda.

Interesting, very interesting. I like the idea of covens, and the feeling of uselessness from Hermione and Ginny is very authentic. Now comes the interesting part... whomever will they give their virginities to? Oh, the suspense!

This is getting more and more interesting. I like the way you are doing your research to enrich the s wit with details. Keep up the good work!