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for The Coven

by Deblovesdragon

person Slashgoddess
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... update soon! *Grins* can\'t wait for more. I\'m wiccan but I totally love this story. It\'s a brilliant idea and I don\'t know why I never thought of it! *grins* It\'s very realistic
person amsev
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woo, I like this story so far. I can\'t wait to see where it goes! Do you have an update list where you send out notices when you update?
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love this story! I wanted to be in the room when Hermione and Ginny were looking in that book. And Luna is really cool--I\'ve always wondered what she would be like as they all got older, so it was really interesting to read how you portrayed her. I\'ll definitely be back for more of this one!

Ciao!
person buttercup
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is building up to something big. I\'ll give you credit, for your first smut fic, yoe jue jumped in with both feet. 5 pairings! I can\'t wait. Excellent chapter.
person rubberduck
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
cool chapter. i really like how you\'re developing the characters. that was an interesting selection of wizards. i figured there would be more students involved, but the inclusion of neville was a surprise. that\'s a very interesting choice. well, i suspect two pairings. i\'m eager to learn who the other three girls get. it should be fun. now, i just hope my computer stays alive long enough for me to read the rest of your story.
person nesscafe
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oops! \"Orry Ocifer pa wight looked pink ta me. Hicup!\" Hehe! Will Snape know she\'s been drinking the night away? Will he care? You\'re an evil woman leaving the story where you have! MORE! MORE! MORE! Please!
person Susan
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for the update! I love this sisterhood. I am really looking forward to seeing what this ritual entails. Only one question: Why didn\'t they include Ernie in the list? I have no problem with it, was just curious. I am glad there are only 5 to eliminate....hopefully it will get us to kickin\' lemons faster! LOL. Take your time and update when you can :-)
person Chalice
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Really excellent story!

I love ritual sex...it just lends such an aura of elegance...lol. Update soon!
person mother
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is great. It is very original and it is refreshing to read something that is not based aroung a theme, good as those are. Keep it up.
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good start... I\'d like to see where you take this... please email me when you update! *grins*Mmmmm... Wicked Sev... *licks lips unconsiously* I love him.... mmmm... *grins* I like him a lot... with a multitude of people... *grins*