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for The Coven

by Deblovesdragon

person scifichick774
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I've been waiting for an update on this forever and it was definitely worth the wait. Nicely done.
person rubberduck
schedule August 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woohoo, finally a chapter for your story. i was almost afraid it wasn't coming back. i loved how the characters got along. i think i say this a bit too much, but it's how i feel. the interaction between the characters are what i love about these fics. i like to see the lesser used people shine in fanfics. your susan is obviously a strong and fierce witch and she needs to protect her 'family'. that's awesome. i can see why you love that character so much. you've set the stage for hermione/snape and harry/ginny, i'm just wondering who you will put the other three with. can't wait to find out.
person Andrian
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well there is one positive thing about noadinading this before...I got to read it all in one sitting. I love it! It is unique and with a touch of humor. I cannot wait for the next part. Please LJ me when you have it up as aff.net is horrible for finding updates.

Well done. Look forward to more.

Andrian and the lovely werewolf
person dryade
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love it. it gets better and better. do update soon. such a sweet story. i can hardly wait....
person Yavonna Han
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read your story and like thy yoy your going about it, unique. Its been awile since you posted. I really cant wait for your next chapter. Any idea when that will be? I am a bid Harry/Ginny fan and hope thats where your going there is a whole lot of them on this site. I also hope it will show each of them and how they turn out and not just Hermione.
person Beatrice
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beg, beg, beg! Pleaase don\'t drop it!!!
person Beatrice
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!
person Dame Niamh
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good on you! I\'ve always wondered why JKR didn\'t write a single word about The Craft, although her witches and wizards employ spells, hexes and brew potions. The Craft was not always thought of as \"women\'s magic - \" even in mediaeval times, men who worked spells were hung or burned as often as women! Covens seem to have been exclusively female in the past, although I do know of a few that have male members today.
I\'m so glad you brought the Hufflepuff girls in; they have been sadly neglected in fanfic. I was going to remind you about \"Americanisms\" like \"Okay\" and Hermione\'s referring to her mother as \"mom\" instead of \"mum\" but I think someone\'s already reminded you. I had to laugh, though, at \"Holy shit!\" I think that\'s international.

Blessed be!
Dame Niamh
person Learic
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAHHH!! You need to write more!!!!! I want to read about the ritual!! Ooooh Snape!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE NNNNOOOOOWWWWW!!!!!!
person Kelly
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well a very interesting story...it will be interesting to see where it goes. Please continue soon.