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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Laura
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just read the last three chapters, and I have to say, this is so incredibly good!! You\'ve really nailed Severus\' personality, and the trouble he\'s having adapting to being in Harry\'s body is very believable, as is the interaction between the tri LOV LOVED that he punched Malfoy, I\'m sure it was quite gratifing for him. I\'m really looking forward to keeping up with this fic and I hope that it is a rather long one. Thank you so much for sharing your talent and updating so rapidly!!
person Mia
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Snape knocks Draco out! I\'m glad someone finally did it.
person Droxy
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My dear you have certainly outdone yourself with this chapter!

I was laughing so hard I cried-
The dorm room screaming for sarcastic comments.
James Potter comparison.
The Dursleys
Coffee from Albus
Snapes so callled moral dillema about flirting
Points to Gryffindor

person ancientgirl
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story more with each chapter. Snape is finally seeing life through Harry\'s eyes and I think beginning to understand life isn\'t all rosy for Harry either. Love the hidden sparks between him and Hermoine. And I just loved when Malfoy got decked. So basically I love this story. Can\'t wait for the next chapter. My only complaint is I want more more more!!!!
person Rilla
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I\'ve been waiting to read this until I had the time and it is excellent! Chapter 5 was fantastic; I couldn\'t pick a favorite part if I wanted The The ending, with Severus having wanted to tell Draco off for years, was priceless. I can\'t wait for the next update.
person spaz141
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic, from the howler monkey Dursleys to punching Draco. Simply brilliant. I really and truly did laugh out loud. Thanks.
person elementaldeity
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Go, Severus, Draco deserved that punch. So, Minerva knows about the swich? I didnt realize Dumbledore told her, but I guess he had to. Well, good chapter, cant wait for more.
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think Severus is starting to enjoy himself. Punching Draco must have been a release for him. I am sure that Severus will think of other fun things to do while inside of Harry\'s body (nudge, nudge)
Oh, I am also glad that you made Severus a quidditch player. It is such an invigorating sport. (Can you tell, I still haven\'t found my bloody dictionary?!)
cheers FQ!
person LittleBird
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
After all this time Severus finally getting to go after Draco -- that was priceless. This has been very interesting and enjoyable. Thanks!!
person Tikina
schedule January 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I can\'t wait untill the next update :-)
~Tikina~