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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Helen
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That\'d, ad, as I\'m torn in two.
I want to read all about Severus being Harry and I really want Hermione to know... Since you can\'t write both at the same time that\'ll be the source of plenty of frustration. Of course that\'ll make me check if there has been a new update all the more often too. And I think it\'s quite believable that he won\'t turn back before it\'s near the end of the story, right? So I\'m also looking forward to the end while dreading it. Maybe I couly thy that someone is practicing mediveal torture on me and all of my four limbs are tied to horses going in differnt directions?
*sigh*
Um... wasn\'t it Minerva in the last chapter that was amused by Sev!Harry insulting Malfoy, or Albus as you say in this chapter? I\'ll have to go back and read it again I guess...
*cackle* My symphaties are with Severus because of the way he\'s being treated. THe poor poor man...
I\'m afraid of how Dumbledore will take the remark about his hormones


Helen
person Deeble
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh so funny -- enough laugh-out-loud lines to make a top 10 list. But I especially enjoyed his teeth-grinding frustration at winning points for Gryffindor.

Keep it up, please!
person Anon
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yeeesss!!! I love seeing Draco get his. Thank you so much for the fast updates -- I\'m completely and totally hooked on this story!

Biting my lip in anticipation of the next chapter....
person Piper S.
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooops! Forgot to add my name to that review. LOVING your story!!!
person Helen
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Grr.
It\'s so frustrating waiting for Hermione to figure it out...
She\'s a smart and a very clever girl, why is it taking her so long?!
My aplogizes, I\'m just waiting for the reactions.

Helen
person Gwennavierre
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story! I am quite addicted. Sevvie got to hit Malfoy! Woo hoo! He\'s probably been aching to do that for six years. Ohh...please hurry up with the next chapter!!

Hugs,

Gwen
person Gwennavierre
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Only one complaint about your story: THE CHAPTERS ARE TOO SHORT!!! I want more! She isn\'t going to find out it\'s Ses uns until...after....right? Hehe. I can\'t wait until the next installment!

Hugs,

Gwen
person Droxy
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, where do you come up with this stuff?

Snape helping Neville as Harry. Wow.

Oh yes- your beta is wondeful. Thank you Kate!

This is going to be great fun reading HG stalking Snape.
person Vicki
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm, coffeeee....

You have me intrigued. I am quite interested as to what will happen next. Pleasn\'tn\'t make us wait too long.
person Deeble
schedule January 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Too short! But hey, you\'re updating so frequently I really can\'t complain. It\'s entertaining to watch what\'s essentially a melding of Snape and Harry -- Hermione\'s appropriately noticing little things about her friend that aren\'t quite right (intensity, for one) and the potions master, meanwhile, can\'t help but realize that thisdentdent he\'s impersonating isn\'t nearly as bad as he thought.