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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Kiristeen
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A definite pleasure to read. I love the insights of Severus. And the stuff about the other Professors was a riot. : )~

Kiri
person Zephyr
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! You go wonderfully into Snape\'s psychology of being in Harry\'s body and having to live his life. In a way he has been granted a second childhood through this unfortuneate accident. Again wonderful!!! I can\'t wait for more!!!
person MsPixie
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, lovely chapter. As expected. Loved the way you describled Snapes thoughts on all the Gryffindors. Funny and well thought. I . I am enjoying your style very much and can\'t wait for next installment.
Love&Respect
MP
person Deeble
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"There was an attempt at deeper thought being made here\" -- classic Snape.

I think you\'ve hit on something with the Quidditch. If Snape can referee a game, he clearly knows it well. He probably was on the Slytherin House team, or at least tried out for it.
person Droxy
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Snape confeses he his lonely and jealous of Potters life and friends. How sad really. I guess this confession sets things up for sympathy from Dumbledore.

I would expect Snape to feel very old living with teenagers. Your grasp of adult POV I\'ve seen in SubRosa still shines here. I remember feeling old looking at university freshman when I was a senior. So I can just imagine what Snape feels.


Another great chapter!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7...... This was a very enlightening chapter!!! I feel bad for all that Severus has been through in his life, but him saying,
person Laura
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just read the last two chapters, very good work. I know Hermione can\'t know the truth until afteey sey switch back, very frustraing that, but the conclusion that she and Ron came to is very believable and does explain \"Harry\'s\" uncharacteristic behavior. You\'re also doing an excellent job of of portraying Severus, you have him decidedly in character even in though he\'s trapped in the body of a hormonal seventeen year old. I wonder how long he\'ll be able to resist the pull of those hormones towards Hermione? Thank you for sharing your talents with us, and updating so quickly, I look forward to the next chapter!!
person LittleBird
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is so nice to see Severus settle in (or attempt to settle in) to Harry\'s life. Interesting how things are developing with Hermione. Can\'t wait for more!!
person Alison of the Faeries
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful. I simply cannot wait for there to be more of it. So, please, write quickly!
person Brian
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay now i\'m getting impatient again. HURRY UP!!! I stopped bugging you with IM\'s so that you could post faster, so far it isn\'t working...