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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Stellar Snape
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Howler monkeys?! Priceless! Thank you. :o)
person Fury
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woohooo! I can\'t wait until she finds out that it\'s been Snape all along... Write more! write more!
person SnapeLover
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Funny chapter!! I LOVE your portrayal of Draco the Drama n! Bn! But I\'m a little confused... In this chapter, Severus is now referre sol solely as \'Harry\'. I\'m curious as to the change; it\'s harder to picture him as Severus with the name change. Is this because this chapter is supposed to be more from Hermione\'s POV? Or is Severus becoming more Harry-like?
person SnapeLover
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DUHHH! I just re-read the chapter beginning again and realized that, yes, it IS Hermione\'s POV... got it now! (big dumb smile)
person Helen
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love Boo scenes.
The one in Soul Searching was wonderful and this is even better as there\'s no action that distracts people from gloating afterwards.


Helen
person spaz141
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really great story, thanks.
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! That was sooooo Snape! hehehehehehehe Beautiful! Simply beautiful!!
person Gwennavierre
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the longer chapter!! ::blows kisses:: Write more soon!!!

Hugs,

Gwen
person Piper S.
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, another fast update! You\'re going to spoil me rotten with these, you know. Every new chapter is more exciting than the last. I\'m excited to see what you have in store for ust! Pt!
person Temptation
schedule January 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic so far. I do,however, feel bad for Snape in a way. Every persons dream - \"to know what I know now and be 20 years younger\" and he does have his ethics that make it hard for him to approach Hermione in this time. I almost feel jealous of Hermione - she gets Snape\'s experience (if he ever does) and Harry\'s stamina. What a combination!!

Keep the updates coming - can\'t wait to see if Snape not Snape/Harry winds up with the girl and will she be able to separate the two in her mind when he changes back? The possibilities....