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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Deeble
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"Harry\" telling off Malfoy is pure, unadulterated Snape, and it\'s a good thing I wasn\'t drinking water at the time or I would have spat it out all over the screen at the \"boo.\" Very funny chapter with subtle character development slid in for good measure!
person Carrie
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
one word,..... \"Boo!\" that was priceless!
person Sci-Fi Nut/ JStockert
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting story thus far and I like the way that Snape is learning to step into Harry\'s shoes and see the world from a different perspective. Whatever will he do when it\'s finally time to go back to his own body, I wonder? I\'ll look forward to finding out. BTW, Thanks for the frequent updates~
~Jules
person Piper S.
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It juets ets better and better. Definitely among my top three favorite WIP\'s! Thank you so much for the daily updates.
person Kiristeen
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That waso* ro* rich!! Loved the entire Snarry - Malfoy scene. :;snickers wildly::

I love the little shy smiles too. Sounds like a man used to being alone suddenly finding himself thrust into the strange and probably a little overwhelming position of popularity. Well done.

Kiri
person Redone
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful.
I like this story very much.
person Evanescence
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This won\'t be constructive. All I can say is: awwww. :-)

Can\'t wait for the next update!

- Eva
person RyianaT
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to say how much I am LOVING this story! It is amazing the way you have put Snintointo Harry, having him attempt to (and do pretty well at ) acting like Harry, and yet still come across very...Snape-like. And, Snape!Harry\'s interactions w/Draco are just too hilarious for words. I do admit that it would\'ve been interesting to see Harry attempt to be Snape and I would\'ve loved to see them gain some understanding about each other\'s lives. But, its so very poignant to see Snape getting as Harry what he has never had before. I look forward to the coming chapters with great anticipation!
person Stellar Snape
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this chapter. Snape\'s shock at learning about Hermione\'s very deep interest in Potions was, erm, entertaining to say the least. Men really can be thick, can\'t they? :o) And Ron\'s stroke of brilliance was a very nice touch. I enjoyed the chapter very much. Keep it up!
schedule January 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a charming story. I am enjoying seeing both Snape and Hermione use the fa