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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice tension. Revealing dream, is her subconcious trying to tell her something? ;)
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Severus wanting to gouge his eyes out with a spoon... That was funny. I love the way that he\'s coming to realize what he has and and what he doesn\'t. I feel for him and his sadness -- I hope he does let Hermione in, they will both be the better for it!!
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wonder what wou would think of Mrs. Longbottom. She seems to like wearing animals on her head too...
I also wonder what they would think of me. I have a whole closet full of the weirdest hats imaginable and right now I go around with a huge fuzzy thing htat is much bigger than my head and very heavy. Practically owning a company that makes hats has nothing to do with it, nothing at all.
Helen
I also wonder what they would think of me. I have a whole closet full of the weirdest hats imaginable and right now I go around with a huge fuzzy thing htat is much bigger than my head and very heavy. Practically owning a company that makes hats has nothing to do with it, nothing at all.
Helen
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm -- how many temptations can one boy, er, man, take? At what point will he figure he\'s nochnichnically taking advantage of a student if he kisses her while in another student\'s body? (The fact that he\'s determined not to do it is completely in character.) And I love the visual image of Neville\'s \"cow eyes,\" by the way!
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, if this isn\'t going to be dark then I hope it is a nice romance.
Great chapter as always.
Great chapter as always.
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9.... Severus is so very lonely & I do hope that he will eventually accept Hermione\'s friendship as himself!!! I don\'t think she feels pity for Severus, I think she just has a very caring nature about her!!! I am wondering if he will be willing to go beyond friendship with her, as Harry, since he has no clue as to how longwillwill remain in Harry\'s body? Til chapter 10, Deb >^..^<
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"A shadow over his shoulder caused him to look up. Albus Dumbledore stood be him him. He was a glorious vision -- hiviorvior, with a pot of Jamaican Blue Mountain java steaming in one hand.\"
Severus, of course, has marvellous taste in coffee. Commendable! Are we sure he\'s going to be taken by the end of the fic? If not, I hereby volunteer, if only for his taste in coffee :D
-Crooked, barista and proud
Severus, of course, has marvellous taste in coffee. Commendable! Are we sure he\'s going to be taken by the end of the fic? If not, I hereby volunteer, if only for his taste in coffee :D
-Crooked, barista and proud
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another excellant chapter that has left me hungering for more! Snape scarier than Neville\'s Grandmother? Poor Neville. Snape is starting to feel the first little signs of pity him,him, though. Oh, I can\'t wait \'til the next chapter to see how Hermione\'s friendish with \'Harry\' grows!
Hugs,
Gwen
Hugs,
Gwen
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And I\'ve finished the latest chapter, and I\'m really impressed. It\'s been an enjoyable read so far: an interesting plot tangle without an overabundance of angst; a good dash of humor (\"Boo!\") and very little fluff. A marvelous recipe for a good time spent reading :) Thank you for sharing it, and I can\'t wait for the next update!
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January 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I was so happy to see more of this! I LOVE how you describe all of Harry\'s quirky little facial expressions. It really adds to the story, and I can picture the scenes so much better. I hope you\'re writing more! Like, right now! Please?!