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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Hermione. =<
How bittersweet.
Very good writing, I like the part of adding Ginny in.
How bittersweet.
Very good writing, I like the part of adding Ginny in.
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really enjoying this - it\'s sweet, poignant, and a gradual shift in Snape\'s attitude that is believable. Keep up the good work!
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice dream sequence -- great way to show that Hermione\'s subconscious has figured out that it\'s the snatche Sna Snape she\'s attracted to in \"Harry.\" Bringing Ginny into the equation adds another dimension to the problem, another reason why neither Hermione nor Snape is likely to act while he\'s having this in-someone-else\'s-body experience. (Of course we\'re all eagerly waiting for them to do SOMETHING. But a good long lead-in just makes the inevitable that much better.)
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
brilliant. nice development. Thanks.
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know the others are anxious for the romance to begin, but I\'m actually glad you\'re doing the setup first. So often you see fics where the couple will just already have been thinking of each other and fall into each other\'s arms, but this one has plot and substance and isn\'t rushing things. Looking forward to more.
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eee! I just won a free dvd and a pass for 14 to a place where we can shoot eachother... Yay, I get to pretend I\'m killing my friends. Good way to get rid of unwanted tension and anger at some of said friends... Woohoo.
Yep, the heart does know. Interesting what Severus!Harry would do if Ginny tried something.
And what Dumbledore would make of that...
Too bad Hermione has to go through all of the guilty feelings about Harry and can\'t know who he really is before he really isn\'t anymore.
Yep, the heart does know. Interesting what Severus!Harry would do if Ginny tried something.
And what Dumbledore would make of that...
Too bad Hermione has to go through all of the guilty feelings about Harry and can\'t know who he really is before he really isn\'t anymore.
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The subconscious mind is an amazing thing. : ) Wonderful chapter.
Kiri
Kiri
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a terrific story. I\'m so glad that I findlly found the time to read and review. I\'m so looking forward to the next chapter. Nice lemon! You are just doing a great job on all of it.
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hermione feels like she\'s cheating on Snape -- nice twist!! This ought to give her something to think about. I like the way this is moving!!
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January 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What I like about this chapter was Hermione