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Chapter 11.... The more of your story I read, the more I am pulled into it!!! The way you bring life to them makes it all the more believable!!!

I have come to the conclusion that this mind transfer is probably one of the best things that could have ever happened to Severus Snape!!! He is being allowed the gift of seeing Harry\'s world (which is much different than he ever imagined) while keeping sight of his own & seeing just how much he is missing as well as learning to appreciate just how hard being Harry really is!!! The end of this chapter just tugged at my heart!!! I think that what Severus is feeling is probably quite close to what Harry feels himself, two very sad souls:( I also think he is starting to see just how much he & Harry have in common!!!

I can only assume that the time will come when Severus & Harry become themselve\'s again. When that time comes, I hope that Severus will not only want to be with Hermione, but will also want to take on a larger presence in Harry\'s life!!! He will have so much newfound information about Harry that I just can\'t see him shutting him out!!! This part just adds to my thoughts that Harry will be included in this: He found himself taking his paternal concerns out on the Gryffindors, Hermione and Ron especially. Ron had declared him worse than Molly Weasley yesterday.

I am very happy that you have been updating this story as muc you you have & I truly look forward to seeing what happens next!!! Til chapter 12, Deb >^..^<

You had my eyes burning with tears at the end of that chapter. You are such a wonderful writer!! I like the thought of Hagrid waiting for Severus after \"meetings\" and the way Severus sees him.
I can\'t wait until Hermione starts her Animagi training. I wonder what animal she will become?? As always, you have me anxious for more.

Hugs,

Gwen

I just wanted to cry at the end. Very intriguing idea to portray two sides to Severus, I don\'t usually think of him as sensitive or caring. I liked that he would care so much about his house. Thanks.

Intense, wow. Great story. Thanks.

Most excellent chapter on peeling the onion layers of Snape. The characterization is so good, you are adding to canon Snape very nicely and in a logical way.

Snape is no dummy seeing though the distractions thrown at HP\'s friends to throw them off the trail.

I always liked the idea that Snape really does care for the kids in his House, otherwise, why take on the job before Voldemorts second rise?

I was wondering what he would do if he had to play Slytherin in Quidditch. I amlooking forward to that game if you decide to do it.

The part covering Hagrid and *kate* the Hufflepuff shows the deeper feelings of Snape.

Poor guy, seems to always be on the ouside looking in.

Given all of this it seems this Snape will also have a sense of proprietry, despite thrly rly chapters. I have no idea how you are going to rve tve the romance that is forming, but I will enjoy the journey.

Seem to be slower in checking for updates than you are with posting (not that I\'m complaining :) )
Great writing and I really enjoyed the fact that for once, Snape actually cares for his house and your reasoning makes it believable. I\'m really feeling sorry for the poor sod, he seems so desperate for some love and friendship. Think I\'ll cuddle him a bit *LOL*. Can\'t wait to see how\'ll\'ll make Hermione & Snape get together. (We all know that\'s how it\'ll end, but it\'s the journey that counts, right?)
Love&Respect
MP

It must be so liberating for Severus to be able to openly care about people... I loved how he chewed out Hooch for not caring enough for Miss Mintage and how he comforted the little Hufflepuff... he\'d never be able to do that as himself even if he wanted to ...

Love it!!! I am so enjoying the daily updates I wish I could write like that. *smile*

You\'re going to make me cry. Oh the pain in my heart! I want to hug him and love on him and make him feel better. So make Hermione do that for me.

Don\'t you just love it when dreams give you those hard to discern messages? Poor Hermione, torn between loyalty to Ginny, her body\'s attraction to \"Harry\", and her minds obvious attraction to Snape. What\'s a to to do? Can\'t wait to find out!! Thanks for the quick updates, keep up the work!