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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter as always.
I think I \'ve said it before, but this just needs repeating. Don\'t EVER stop writing!
Even if your hands are immobile have someone write your ideas for you. And even if you can\'t speak let other people know of your talent and share it...
And gosh do I need sleep...
Zzzzzzzzzzzzz.
I think I \'ve said it before, but this just needs repeating. Don\'t EVER stop writing!
Even if your hands are immobile have someone write your ideas for you. And even if you can\'t speak let other people know of your talent and share it...
And gosh do I need sleep...
Zzzzzzzzzzzzz.
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Severus is so sad, I think I\'m going to cry:(( Won\'t he be surprised to finally see Hermione smile at him intead of \"Harry\"? You are doing such an incredible job of conveying emo emotions, as well as Hermiones when it\'s her pov, that is definitely one of the strengths of this fic. Glad to hear that you have lots more in store for us. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter!!
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. I love it. I hope you update again soon.
It\'s worthy of all the praise I can\'t think of at the moment.
It\'s worthy of all the praise I can\'t think of at the moment.
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love that he\'s so concerned about his students.
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the image of Snape as the more-or-less doting Head of House (so well done in your Sub Rosa world -- I\'m glad you introduce it here, too). The way you\'re making him increasingly attracted to Hermione i gra gradual -- and therefore so realistic -- and I\'m glad you\'re taking your time. (Plus the idea that his \"think unsexy thoughts\" image is Pince in a variety of lingerie is laugh out loud funny.)
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! The end of this chapter was just heartbreaking. Such a lovely job of eliciting sympathy from the reader for Severus by showing his overprotectiveness of the students, then reminding us how broken and lonely he really is. His interaction with Hooch was great, knowing all those details offhand like that. I also liked the way he wasn\'t so sure he wanted to beat Slytherin at Quidditch.
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the history that yve gve given Severus here. You\'ve created an entire past in nothing more than a paragragh or two, and it\'s not only plausible, but rich with possibilities for more exploration. If I didn\'t know better, I\'d think this was canon. Absolutely.
It just gets better and better...
It just gets better and better...
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The Hufflepuff was Kate Smith!! How cute! I am sure that Myrtle just loved that one!
Severus\'s pain and longing is just tugging at my heart. Throw the poor shlub a bone, will you?
Love the work! (As usual)
Severus\'s pain and longing is just tugging at my heart. Throw the poor shlub a bone, will you?
Love the work! (As usual)
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully bittersweet chapter, as well as a great insght into Severus\' mind. The Library scene was great. Made me laugh. The stuff with Hagmademade me want to pout and sniffle. Good job.
Kiri
Kiri
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January 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, damn, damn! Anotehr excellent set of chapters. You\'ve really got a gift for this, and I really like Severus being able to do some of the things as Harry that he couldn\'t do as Severus (like comfort the Hufflepuff girl). This is a very cool character exploration of him - I love it!