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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooooooh.it just keeps getting better and better. and yay ron. you dont know how many times happier it makes me to see how you portray ron. they way pep write ron (as well as lucius) always factor greatly on a fic for me. and i love how you dont have him as a raving mad jealous boy like is often seen. so yay and mad props to you.
please do write more soon. hopefully ill see the next chaper..but getting 10 chapters again at next seeing point will be cool too.
thanks.
please do write more soon. hopefully ill see the next chaper..but getting 10 chapters again at next seeing point will be cool too.
thanks.
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m just having the greatest time reading thiory.ory. Many thanks and keep it coming!
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A very pleasant read so far! I hope you\'ll keep updating, I don\'t often run across stories this well written! Your characterization is right on target, in my opinion. I also love your humor. Its well timed and subtle. I actually laughed out loud at one point. :) Thanks for keeping me entertained. I\'m adding this story to my favorites list, hope you won\'t leave me hanging! :P
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Ginny! Things are getting more and more twisted for everyone involved. This story just keeps getting better and better. Keep up the good work, can\'t wait for the next chapter!
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww! You certainly pulled my heartstrings with that ending. Some nice, fluffy goodness was exactly what the doctor ordered. I really like that you make Snape be really and truly concerned about the children in his house. It shows a side of him that we don\'t normally get to see. Keep up the fantastic job and thank you for updating so frequently. :o)
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! :)
I just came across this story tonight and have not been able to stop until now. Keep writing this it really is brilliant. Only one word of advice. Be careful not to change Snapes character too fast or much as his his dark side that makes him one of the Sexiest chacters in the book.
I would really appreciate it if you would notify me when you next post a chapter. Can\'t wait for more.
Kath x x
I just came across this story tonight and have not been able to stop until now. Keep writing this it really is brilliant. Only one word of advice. Be careful not to change Snapes character too fast or much as his his dark side that makes him one of the Sexiest chacters in the book.
I would really appreciate it if you would notify me when you next post a chapter. Can\'t wait for more.
Kath x x
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just read the first chapter and thought that I\'d leave a short review/note of appreciation before going on.
This is written so well!
I enjoy reading H/S-Stories.
I appreciate it a lot if the choice of words, writing style and spelling are on a certain level; if not, it makes me cringe and sometimes leave - no danger of that here!
And I just love stories that have humor, and in this resect your first chapter already has me hooked (with things like: \"Severus wondered how many insults it would take to push the man into a coronary and decided that Dumbledore would not be amused to know the answer to that.\") and wanting for more, so I\'m off to reading it now.
Keep up the good work!
Lucie
This is written so well!
I enjoy reading H/S-Stories.
I appreciate it a lot if the choice of words, writing style and spelling are on a certain level; if not, it makes me cringe and sometimes leave - no danger of that here!
And I just love stories that have humor, and in this resect your first chapter already has me hooked (with things like: \"Severus wondered how many insults it would take to push the man into a coronary and decided that Dumbledore would not be amused to know the answer to that.\") and wanting for more, so I\'m off to reading it now.
Keep up the good work!
Lucie
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ron\'s logic, gotta love it. Poor Ginny, don\'t really like her - hope she doesn\'t do something horrible. Thanks.
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January 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12... The conversation in Hagrid\'s hut was .... WOW!!! It was touching, thoughtful & bits of it were quite sad!!! I hope that the revelations that Severus has shared with Hagrid, Ron & Hermione will stay with him when he returns to himself, so he keeps an open mind toward Harry, remembering just what he has to face at such a young age!!!
I do like how you are writing Ron\'s character!!! He has become more thoughful, but is still quite stubornullhullheaded!!! I think you have aged him quite well!!!
Damn those people that have to stand in the shadows & listen in on conversations that they shouldn\'t hear;-) I do feel badly for Ginny & I hope that she doesn\'t take her feelings out on Hermione!!!
Til chapter 13, Deb >^..^<
I do like how you are writing Ron\'s character!!! He has become more thoughful, but is still quite stubornullhullheaded!!! I think you have aged him quite well!!!
Damn those people that have to stand in the shadows & listen in on conversations that they shouldn\'t hear;-) I do feel badly for Ginny & I hope that she doesn\'t take her feelings out on Hermione!!!
Til chapter 13, Deb >^..^<