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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapters 14 & 15... I know that Albus means well, but he really needs to learn to mind his own business once in a while!!! I am so glad that Minerva is on Severus\' side!!! I really wish that Severus would have told her about finding Hermione reading to his body!!! I think she would have been able to help him see that Hermione has some feelings for him, even if only caring at this point!!! I do like what she said about allowing her to make up her own mind & I hope he will remember that!!!

The whole situation utterly hopeless, I think NOT!!! This whole thing reminds me of that saying: It is better to have loved & lost tha nev never have loved at all!!! I think that both Severus & Hermione deserve the right to love & be loved, even if it may only be for a short time!!! He is basing everything on \"what if\'s & maybe\'s\" instead of taking the chance of things working out!!! If you want something badly enough it is worth the risk & Severus has never been one that does not take risks!!

I can\'t wait to see how things go & have to admit that I hope Severus throws caution to the wind & risks his heart!!! Til chapter 16, Deb >^..^<
person Serenbel
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say how much I love this fic. It\'s the kind of fan-fiction that I want to be able to write.

The differences bertween Albus\' and Minerva\'s views on the whole thing are going to be very interesting.

Keep up the good work. :)

S xxxx
person Alisha
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is beautiful...just beautiful. I love it so much! Please continue....:)
person Deeble
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Running out of creativity? Oh no -- does that mean you\'ll only update every other day? ;-)

I\'m glad you\'re writing some chapters from Snape\'s point of view and some from Hermione\'s, giving us insight into both characters. Hermione\'s discovery that Snape might actually be -- gasp -- the caring sort is amusing, not to mention critical to her ability to later see him as the one she\'s been falling for rather than Harry. And the Hedwig angle is interesting ... is she hanging out with Snape\'s body? (If so, she must not be there constantly.) Or perhaps she was injured too?

Looking forward to the next chapter, whenever it may be posted.
person Campy Capybara
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Terribly touching! I like that Hermione\'s reading potions journal articles to the Professor and Severus knowing about it. It\'s double the irony and double the heartache. lovely.
person FadingSlowly
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! MORE! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!!! IT\'S ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I\'VE READ SO FAR!
person Imhilien
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I find a day isn\'t complete without checking for another update (which you are frequently able to do, thank you!). It is a really great story.
Hmm....will Dumbledore have be having a \'friendly chat\' to Severus about Hermione i.e. avoid romantic entanglements?
person spaz141
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just want to cry, this is a wonderfully written story. Thanks.
person Tarrin
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it\'s soooo great. this has gotta be one of the best potter fics i\'ve read on this site, bravo! please update soon, i can\'t wait to read more!!!
person spaz141
schedule January 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, you\'re killing me, but in a good way. Thanks.