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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a truly lovely story! I can only hope that my own life\'s story ends so well! You write so very well.....and I know what hard work it is too. Finding the time and inspiration is 2/3 of it! The other 1/3 is getting actually getting it written and done. Take care and I hope to read more from you soon.
person Alex
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing, thats all i can say, amazing......! Well done, xxx
person Shinigami
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* It\'s really over'm s'm so sad that it is over. A job well done, from you and your beta. The last two chapters were sappy, so sweet, it\'s sickening.... NAH! It\'s cute. I think your characters have suffered enough to have a well deserved, albeit sickeningly sweet ending *grins* Just kidding. I love your fic so much, I save it on my drive so I can read it again and again... In fact, when my friends come over, I\'m going to let them read it... they don\'t read fics, you know.. perhaps this will convince them otherwise.

I hope that you and your companions are feeling better. Take good care of yourself. Again a job well done... and you say it\'s supposed to be only 10+ chapters... LOL... it\'s 44 in all..... Thank you for sharing with us your writing, ideas, and my, you successfully tied up all of your fic\'s loose ends... I\'m impressed. *grins*
person Red Writing Hood
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I dont think I have ever read a more beautiful ending than this story. It was simply...beautiful. I have enjoyed this story from start to unfortunately...to finish. Such a wonderful piece of work. Congratulations on a fatastic fic.

Red
person awwwww
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The ending was warm and fuzzy. :D
person spaz141
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice. thanks. *sigh* its over.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe that this is coming to an end!!! I have truly enjoyed every word!!!

Chapter 43... I really LOVE the inner musings that each of them had about the morning after!!! I don\'t think their being together now would be so incredible if it had not been for the time they took to get to know each other!!! I also think that the way that you use the dreams to show his emotions is perfect!!!

I really like Lady Amelia!!! I think that she & Hermione would have a lot to share in the future!!! She already seems happy in the fact that Hermione makes Severus happy!!!

It is with mixed emotions that I look forward to the epilogue!!! Sorry to see this end, but thankful that I have had the chance to read such a FABULOUS story!!! Til chapter 44, Deb >^..^<
person Moaning Myrtle
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Can I just add one odd thing? {yeah, like you could stop me...}

I\'ve been married long enough (20 years this fall) that I\'m fairly certain to have passed beyond any silly romantic notions -- and it CAN indeed be really, really good.

Are there problems in real life? DUH! Of course!

Does that mean that \"happily ever after\" only happens in fiction? Nope.

Trust me, there are incredible benefits to new relationships but there\'s little that compares to a long-term understanding of one another. Oh my, he CAN be trained -- when I make that noise, it means that I really like it....

Sorry, I\'ing ing sappy, but romance doesn\'t necessarily die during after ther first few years. Hmmm, can we say \"kate\'s getting some?\" LOL.
person Silvermoon
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just have to say that this wa a truely amazing story. I loved how Hermione looked at the garden as Severus\' happy ness. And it was such a fine ending.

Silvermoon
person Lady Anne
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve read this fthe the beginning when you started, and I just wanted to say what a great story this has been. I\'m sorry it\'s complete! The ending made me cry- it was perfect! Congrats on a job well done!