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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Tarrin
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoa, totally unexpected Crookshanks to be up to something...excellent!
person Imhilien
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, poor Severus. He\'s really putting himself through angst.......your harshest critic is always yourself.

Cheers
- Imhilien :-)
person Vicki
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In my mind, there is nothing more sad or beautiful than unrequited love.
I am actually pleased that you changed genres from comedy to angst. I think it does the story well.
That last chapter was unbeta-ed? I\'m impressed. I didn\'t notice any mistakes, whatsoever. I commend you on that fair acheivement. Well done!
person heartnut
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY- this gets better with each chap! Keep going, seems like you didn\'t get much done in this chap. I think it\'s time for SS and A fig figure out what went wrong and fix it.
person heartnut again
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope that you give HG some credit and have her figure it out sometime soon- she\'s too smart for this, I think. What do you think?
person Kiristeen
schedule January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeeee! She\'s *almost* there! LOL I find myself leaning forward in my chair while reading, urging Hermione to put the pieces together. : )~ It doesn\'t work to help her, but... LOL

Kiri -- eagerly awaiting more.
person Skjeve
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, dear. Heh. Two entirely different perspectives on a very tangled problem for poor Severus. Both from people he trusts, and both from people I imagine he\'d just as soon avoid pissing off... ~cackle~ To say nothing of poor Hermione.

I\'ve enjoyed the story very much so far; well-paced angst is always fun. *g*
person Deeble
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was doing alright up until this chapter, but now you can add me to the list of people teary and sniffling over your story. Poor, poor man:
person Nocturnus
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Uhuh! Minerva aproving? Interesting, at least he could have some support.
Albus was very kind about all the affair. Like it, as usual.
person Campy Capybara
schedule January 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The tension! The tension! Ah! The tension is killing me! An almost kiss, and the underlying *passion*! You are so totally skilled in drawing out this tension. I\'m so waiting for the fireworks to happen.