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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Nocturnus
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Even if Hermione is very clever, it don
person Ann
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor babies! And poor Ron, having to keep a secret all by himself.
person Adriana
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know how many times I can tell you how much I love this story! The scene with Crookshanks and McGonagall was fabulous! I could clearly picture it in my head. And I\'m very glad that at least Ron knows it\'s really Snape. This is just so well done! I look forward to more.
person moonmint
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m really enjoying this. And Ron figured it out! That actually makes a lot of sense, they probably spend more time together (usually) just because of sharing a dorm room. And I definitely like the characterization of Ron, and how he reacts once he has got it figured out.
person Rilla
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The Minerva and Cshanshanks conversation was great! And I love it that Ron figured it out. It\'s nice to see Ron have the upper hand for a change.
person ancientgirl
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG, Snape and Ron bonding this was wonderful. And I loved the whole Minerva Crookshanks thing. This was such a fantastic chapter! You are the best! I guess Hermoine will not be figuring it out on her own since Severus is probably going to write her a letter, but its nice to see Ron isn\'t as daft as we think he is.
person hope
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ROFLMAO! Cat Nip Man! I\'ve owned cats for most of my life and you captured feline spirit hilariously! And thank you for making a Ron who\'s intelligent enough to figure it all out. I\'m tired of Idiot!Ron. Thank youmuchmuch for the consistant updates and I\'ll be back tomorrow!
person buttercup
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I thought the interaction between Minerva and Crookshanks was going to be the highlight of the chapter, but then I got down to Severus and Ron. Oh my! What a fantastic story! I also love the quick updates. Keep up the good work.
person Skjeve
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve a soft spot in my heart for cats; nifty to have Crookshanks and Minerva conspiring against Hermione :)
Ron and Severus as friends...? Stranger things have happened, I suppose. Can\'t wait for the next update.
person Kiristeen
schedule January 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! The bathroom scene was absolutely hilarious! : )~ And spot on, if you want my humble opinion. I see it as being entirely possible for Ron to figure it out first -- especially since Hermione has \'animal\' interference being run -- Ron spends a lot more time alone with Harry than Hermione does, sharing a dorm room and all. And Ron may not be the most serious person around, or the most book learned, but imho, he\'s a heck of a lot more perceptive than most people give him credit for.

Wonderful chapter.

Kiri