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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Fran
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UH OH!!!!! That\'s all I can think of to say... Ron knows Hermione Likes Snapes personality better than Harry\'s!@@ UH OH@
person AureliaFlint
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Seeing as I am not a HG/SS fan, it\'s quite high praise. I decided to try a chapter and I loved it. The premise is well developed. I find that HG/ss \'s biggest obstacle is the age difference and the teacher angle. I like that you bringing up the fact that Dumbledore would never let Severus seduce a student. I can\'t wait to see how the story developes. Once agin, brillant job!
person Tarrin
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter, as always! *bows* what more can i say?
person GlindaTrisstt
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not sure if I reviewed this before, but since you were kind enough the not only read, but take the time to review my work I had to make sure to return the favor !

I have been reading this from the onset and have been jumping on every update like a Starvin\' Marvin on a cracker.



Love the insightful Ron, the not completely with it Hermione and pooveruverus having to go through the teenage years again. Oy ! Once was too much !!

Love it, love it, love it.......... can\'t wait for more.

Glinda
person XxphoenixX
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another interesting chappie, m\'dear. Love the frustration, so wonderfully irritating. Just a slight thing that had me confused, first you said the score was 120-100 with Slytherin in the lead, which would mean Slytherin had the 120 points. Then Harr/Snape caught the snitch, and you claimed Gryffindor won 270-100, so I think you\'ve got it backwards. I think. If I\'m wrong then gee, do I look stupid. Anyway, great job again. Update!
person e
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
have absolutely nothing constructive or otherwise to say. not even praise-y, and obviously there is nothing to criticize *except length, i want more, but im glad that you update often. so im very torn.* . absolutely speechless *and if you knew me, youd understand how BIG a task that is*
so instead of saying anything, i send you this

::SMOOCH::

xoxo
...me...
person Brian
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t care if EPU is starting an every other day posting schedule, but don\'t slow down with this one, it\'s starting to get interesting, cause now we get to see Ron lie and act like nothing is wrong with Harry. Instead of just snape and a few of the teachers. That and I could use some help on beating writer\'s block. Email me with any tips you might have.
person sakhara291@hotmail.com
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god.......
person Droxy
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi-
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person Helen
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ron still manages to confuse me.
Great! He\'s actually a complex person not just a thing that lives for quidditch!