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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Brian
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now it\'s time for one collective cheezy.... AAAAAWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. We all feel pink and fuzzy inside. You already know that I love this story, so I\'ll end with a Top Notch Job Barrie.
person zenia
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yaaay!!
person Kitty
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love it. I couldn\'t stop reading it. I can\'t wait to read more of your writings. What a great story line and such great details. Great story.
person Kristine
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::sniff sniff:: Domestic bliss...God that\'s so sickeningly cute...:) I LOVE IT!!!
Well, I\'ve stuck by this fic \'til the end, and I must say that it is just bloody brilliant! One of the best H/S fics I\'ve ever read, just because I thought it was so completely new and original!! ...It also helps that it\'s one of the few fics that I\'ve read completely...
I LOVE IT!!!!
person Helen
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*wipes tears*
person Campy Capybara
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A too too beautiful ending to a wonderful story! I love how you managed to squeeze familial difficulties and growth even in this short chapter. And the tone of this last chapter was so dient ent to that of the war that in a sense, made the fight worth it. Congrats on completion! I look forward to reading your other stories.
person Droxy
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Clapping- great job. Very enjoyable story.

kate is gonna give you are hard time for using \"the end\". Thanks for a happy ending.

your creation is 148 pages on A4 paper.


I am so missing Sev in K from EPU.....(sniffs). While this Sev was more canon, I really love your sub rosa Snape.
person Katharine
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello friendlyquark,
I\'ve been following your fic from the beginning. Always waiting for updates because from the start i fell in love with yoic. ic. It started great, continued on and never went dry. I find it really hard to get ideas and write even when prompted by a challenge which more often makes it harder so i really love what you have done. I could not imagine a better response to the Polylove challenge. And because it was the end of your fic i though you really by now deserved a review so sorry i haven\'t reviewed every chapter which you really deserved! Also like to say a bit for Kate, I don\'t know how much you\'ve had to beta but you sound really supportive and absolutely everything a beta should be and more. Beta\'s dont get the recognition they deserve and i was really pleased to read the thanks to you at the beginning of every chapter! Congrats to you both. You\'re probably both sad and yet relieved that it\'s over but i\'m sure i\'ll see more from you two in the future.
Lots of love and best wishes
Katharine
person shiv5468
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh what a sweet ending. And what a lovely story overall.
person Kat Delacour
schedule March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww ... that was beautful, man! i think i\'ve got something in my eye ...

*wipes away a tear*