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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Lisa
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
***SQUEAL!!*** Ron knows!! This is *such* a good story! I can\'t even begin to write a proper review. I\'m way too \"squealy\" right now, lol. Thanks for allll the uber-quick updates. It makes this story even better somehow. :) Keep writing! Sacrifice sleep and food if you have to! Your fans need you!!
person crissy
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor abused hermione! those boys are playing with her head. mean boys!
this fic is great! i love reading it. its funny and a little emotional. and just really fantastic!
person spaz141
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, Hermione\'s going to have a nervous break down isn\'t she? If I start to chant \'give into the hormones Severus\' will it work? Great story, love the build up. I almost started to cry with Hermione, you are writing her frustration well. Thanks.
person tifsuz
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it!

*feints*

Ron with a clue! Who would have guessed? It\'s a nice change to see him written this way, to often he gets thrown to the side as an idiot or asshole to make way for my favorite couple. It\'s nice to see him mature for a change. Plus now Severus has sort of a friend.
person ShagsTheDustmop
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Now THAT is a surprise, Ron figuring out before Hermione. My hat is off to you, it is so rare fics are surprising anymore :)
person Imhilien
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I see Ron has found out about the body switch - it\'s good that he\'s being understanding and not waving crosses in Sev/Harry\'s face, so to speak.

But, Severus as \'Cat Nip Man? Mwahaha! ^_^.

I look forward to more.

Cheers
- Imhilien :-)
person gthistle
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Haven\'t reviewed before, but I\'ve been enjoying each chapter as you update. Your A/N (re: guessing) prompted this--so when will Hermione figure out that she\'s been reading potions articles to Hedwig? :) Go Ron for being sensitive about Severus\' revelation as well as obtusely in-character (as teenaged boy) about Hermione\'s. Also, I know that Albus\' reservations about the indefinitely unresolved tension owe in part to the challenge terms, and it\'s great not to see him twinkling all over everything--but isn\'t Minerva a little blase, then? She barely reacts to Crookshanks\' news in Ch. 17. (No doubt you have her thoughts in hand already, one way or another, given her cryptic comment to Hermione in Ch. 18.)
person genrou
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hell must have frozen over because i actually saw the next chapter on time. ^__^ go me. anyway so i say what you said in response to me and i kept trying to figure out either to forge ahead or go back and see what i said. after much debate i went back- saw the ron thing and got excited and hoped that what you ment. there was the cat thing, was a bit weirded out, and then thought than man its gonig to be in the next chapter and almost damned my luck this time. luckily that wasnt the casede. however we did get tio him masturbating and i was like oh..no.. and i pulled my hat lower and my scarf higher (hey its cold) trying to shiled my eyes somehow in fear that ron would like recognizeharry\'s masturbating stlye. ewww. he\'d all be like no, you cant be harry cause harry would never jack off in his bed... yeah, eww. then of course i thought i might have been safe but you entered shower territory...
any way, yay ron for being uber cool. yay.
thanks.
person Miss Teigne
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just dicovered your fic, and it\'s absolutely beautifully written!! You write with such depth and detail...I\'m in awe. I especially like the little touches like the chess piece wiping his brow. The Crookshanks angle is great as well; I haven\'t seen that before. Thank you also for giving Ron a well-developed personality, something a lot of people seem to forget about. It was great of you to throw him a bone-I\'m not trying to be nasty-with the Lavender thing. Anyways, I\'m really, really impressed! Please update soon, and if you have some sort of mailing-list you could add me to to inform your readers of when you\'ve updated, please do so. Once again, it\'s wonderful!!
person Fran
schedule January 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m back again... ok, this chapter was good and a surprise. I was w in in my guess about Silver Fur being Dumbledore, but I was close. I really like how u portrayed Ron... he\'s more understanding than most authors make him. You also made him more... inquisitive i guess u could say. Most people would underestimate him... one more chapter to read and them I\'m done for ur updates!!! Love it and don\'t stop!!!