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aww........

Love it, love it, love it!! I feel another dream coming, at least I would be dreaming again if I was Hermione, with all that emotion she\'s feeling. It\'s so frustrating that she hasn\'t figured it out yet, I know she can\'t until he\'s back in his own body, which does make for a more interesting story. I can see so many possible ways for the story to continue, I can\'t wait to see what you do. Keep up the good work!!

Oh goody, Hermione is going to solve the problem for Harry/Snape. I like that Ron and H/S are getting to be friends. Wonder how this will all turn out. More soon please.

I love this story. You\'ve nailed each character, and the writing is flawless. I don\'t think I\'ve ever seen such careful attention paid to the development of Snape\'s and Hermione\'s emotions since F&R. My only advice for you would be to give Ginny just a little more screen time. Her perspective looks like it\'s going to be important in the plot, but I don\'t really *feel* her motivation the way I do the other characters\'. Of course, given the quality of every single other aspect of the story, I\'m certain you\'ve already thought of that. ;) Thanks again for a great read.

I\'d already thought of the Cyrano parallel but please please plseas don\'t give us such a tragic ending! And thanks again for making Ron something besides Gryffindor Git or comic relief!

\"Dumbledore she mentally strangled with his own beard\" AWE-SOME!!!! lol I loved it!!!! I can\'t wait to see what Hermione makes of the equasions when she is done.

First of all, I adore you. Your writing is simply ingenius and it shows each and every chapter.
Second, you are the absolute best. You\'re doing away with the SS/HG cliches. (Stupid Ron, self-absorbed petty Lavendar and Parvati). That\'s smething that deserves to much credit it\ it\'s unbelieveable.
I like how, despite the fact that this is a challenge and has limitations, you\'ve been able to develop the story in your own way. It keeps branching out in different directions.
Oh, and Dumbedore being strangled with his own beard. That\'s comedy.

OOOOOO!!! and now the plot thickens! hurry and update, please. aloha, mele

Eeeee! There are so many things I liked about this chapter that I don\'t even know where to begin. LOL The overall interaction between SEverus and Ron was fantastic, as well as Ron\'s internal monologue before their conversation. Very believeable (and funny)

And what can i say, but *go* Hermione!!!!!! LOL


Kiri (who\'s on the edge of her seat)

So, when is \"Harry\" going to come looking for his Arithmancy homework? I hope it doesn\'t give up the game. Hehe. The scene between Ron and Severus was quite touching...as much as a scene between a Slytherin and a Griffindor can be. Hope your fingers are still attached!!!