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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Nocturnus
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Come on, hurry a little bit the pace. You kil killing us!
person ancientgirl
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aha! I knew it. She\'s going to figure out how to put Harry and Snape in each others bodies. Oh I sooooo can\'t wait for your next chapter. And I loved the
person Campy Capybara
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'d hate to be in Ron\'s shoes. *grins* To know that Hermione actually likes his snarky Potions Master, to be caught in the middle of a Misunderstanding, to be friends with the parties involved and know that parties\' feelings are mutal - lotflol!

I really look forward to updates of this story. The tension between Hermione and Severus is really well-drawn. Thanks for your frequent updates!
person kate
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Personally, I\'ve had more than a few of those \"torture all men men in my life\" fantasies!

As usual, your gift with pathos gets right to the heart: \"First you
person tifsuz
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So did Hermione get the equations by mistake, or where they \'slipped\' to her on purpose?

Lov as as always, the stuff between Ron and Severus is great. Severus is of course still snarky! but more open.

Tifany
person Skjeve
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Have I mentioned how much I\'m in love with this story? I adore it. I have rarely come across a fic in which I pounce on every update like a cat with catnip-laced tuna; this is one of those few. I can\'t wait for another update! Every time I come to the end of a chapter, a little part of me sighs in disappointment; I want to keep reading until I come to the end of the tale!
person Louise
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the teenage angst, I love the dilemma of the older man in the younger body and the crush and Hermione\'s mixed emotions. I love everything about this story and I want to read it all start to finish as soon as you are finished!!!

Could you finish it today please!!!!??????!!!!!!
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19... This was a WONDERFUL look into the relatiop/frp/friendship that has formed between Ron & Severus!!! I really like how they are both being as open with eatherther as they are!!!

This newly found bit of information that Hermione is working on may change things a lot sooner than Severus expects!!!

I\'m sure you have already figured out by my other reviews that I really want Severus to be with Hermione, even if he waits until after her graduation!!! I think he needs to lay the ground work before then though!!! I also feel that if it\'s something that he really wants he would find a way to make it work & keep her safe in the process!!! Look what he has been doing for years, he has to know a thing or two about keeping things secret;-) I believe that he has a fantastic ally in Ron, not to exclude Minerva being in his corner!!!

Enough of that, I know that this is your story & you will write it as you see it & I do 100% respect that!!! I am very much enjoying it & will be reading it to the end!!! I guess I get sad at the thought that they are so sad & want them both to be happy!!! ook ook forward to your next update, Deb >^..^<
person Gwennavierre
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another spectacular chapter! Are you sure you don\'t want to post the next one up now? It would save us all a bit of sanity because right now I am sure most of us are banging our heads on our computers because the chapter is over and there are no more until tomorrowH! IH! I don\'t know if I can waiting 24 hours to see what happens next!!

SHE\'S GOING TO SOVE THE EQUATIONS THAT HELP GET HIS BODY BACK!!!!! Oh, HURRY HURRY HURRY!!!!

I love the dialog between Ron and Snape. Each of them got a nice chance to speak their mind to the other and they are still \"friends\".
I think Sevvie is going to have a hard time being mean when he goes back to his body. Will he apologise to Hermione for the teeth thing? I just read that part of GOF. I had forgotten just how rottenlyn hen he was then. I guess she respects him anyway, though, if she had tears in her eyes just thinking about him \"never waking up\".

I will now cease my ramblings and let you get on with posting the next chapter!

hugs,

Gwen
person Deeble
schedule January 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Snape sure knows Hermione: Homework -- better than a love note. A nice puzzle for her to work out, and he can\'t even be accused of telling her the truth. But is this meant only to lead her to the conclusion that her friend and her potions teacher have swapped bodies, or is he hoping she\'ll figure out what happened and then continue on to figure out a solution?

The scene with Ron and Snape was funny and sweet, though not at all in a maudlin way. The idea that he wants to get back into his own body so he can start hating everyone again made me laugh, but it\'s rather sad, really. Means he\'s more comfortable being nasty, having been required to act that way for so long, and he\'s clearly not used to having friends -- Minerva and Albus notwithstanding.

Oh, and about that homework -- it\'s a nice touch that Hermione recognized Snape\'s handwriting, thatthat she felt a wave of unbidden grief at the thought of him incapacitated. The heart wants what it wants, no matter how much the brain grumbles.