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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Laura
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well it\'s about bloody time that Hermione got her hands on that puzzle, I was actually wondering why Severus hadn\'t asked for her help earlier. I\'m sure she\'ll be able to figure out how to get them back into the proper bodies. The conversation between Ron and Severus was wonderful. I\'m so glad that you\'ve chosen to write Ron with more than half a br It\ It\'s nice for Severus that someone knows who he is and actually likes him for him. An interesting and unlikely friendship, especially in a SS/HG fic, but it works well and I love it. You continue to surprise me with each chapter, and I\'m obviously not the only one loving it, judging by the number of hits it\'s received. Keep up the good work!!
person ckat44
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is really really good. I do not usually read stories with such a high rating but this plot seemed so wonderful, I couldn\'t resist. I cannot wait for the update. I am anxious to see what happens when Harry is back and Severus is in his own body. You are a wonderful writer.
person mele
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
loved the chapter, quarky ol boy! i feel so sorry for severus. now he has to gok tok to everyone looking at him like a pariah. will hermione ever know? aloha, mele
person An Onymous
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please! No sighs! This is GREAT WRITING! and a WONDERFULLY tart-almost-sour lime angst. I loor uor updates every day, or when you post to WIKTT. Thank you for writing.
person deblovesdragon
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a fast turn around. Hermione solves the equation and BOOM they are back in their own bodies.
Oh, write more soon FQ. I want to see Sus aus and Hermione meet each other again. How long will it take her to realize the old Harry is back. Not that long, I am sure.

Hey, how are Ian and Tonks doing? Hint, hint.
person e
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
le gasp!!!!!


errrrrrrr i loooooooooove yoooouuuu and thissss stoooorry

oi. all fuzzled now.

xoxo
...me...
person Deeble
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Harry\'s got to dislike Snape less now, between playing with him as a child and getting to see (remember?) the man reduce school enemy number one to jelly. (I\'d add \"saving his life by pretending to be him,\" but canon tells us that obviously means nothing to the Boy-Who-Lived-But-Never-Thanks-Snape-For-It.) I like the way you connected Hermione\'s dreams to Harry\'s dream-state ... I\'d ask how that could happen but since the answer is clearly \"magic,\" there\'s probably no point pondering the psychic possibilities of -- um, darn, ran out of p-words.

We all know you\'re not going to keep Snape away from Hermionspecspecially as he\'s just admitted there\'s no one her equal (not even him?), but I can\'t wait to see how you manage it.

The line \"the next time he came to visit himself\" just shows how much humorous potential there is in body-swapping. In case you can\'t tell, I really love this story.
person scifichick774
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh! They\'re back in their own bodies! I can\'t wait to see how Hermione reacts to Harry being the old Harry again. More soon please.
person Kiristeen
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lololololololol \"I would pay to see that!\" : ) If I was him, so would I. Glad I got to see it the first time around. ::snickers:: Excellent chapter!


Kiri
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 20... So it was Severus as a child that was the little boy in the dreams, interesting!!! The 3 of them had been sharing these dreams so I have to assume that they will be a key to something in a future chapter!!!

I can\'t wait to see if you have Severus speak to Ron before Harry returns to his own life? Things are about to get really different for all 4 of them!!! I would think that Severus would at least talk to Hermione about the Arithmancy equations!!!

Til chapter 21, Deb >^..^<