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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Zephyr
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh no!!! Why Why Why.. Oh Poor Hermione.. ...Please Update ..!!!
person ancientgirl
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh please give us more. I can\'t get enough of this. I feel so incredibly bad for Severus. Out of all the characters in the world of Harry Potter I feel the most for Snape. He is a very sad figure, and there is so muc him him we don\'t know. I love how you are writing him.
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 21... It was interesting to see a bit of Hermione\'s past where Severus is concerned!!! I still hope that she realizes that the Harry she had been around lately was only making her want to get to know Severus better!!!

I know that it is common to see Severus\' character feeling a lot of self loathing & I think that shows here. He never took advantage of his situation while in Harry\'s body (he wanted to, but didn\'t) so I don\'t see him as a pedophile, pervert or monster at all!!! I can see him feeling that way about himself though!!!

I really did like that last line, sad but so very fitting!!! Til chapter 22, Deb >^..^<
Who is still hoping that one of them will at least make some sort of effort to set the ball in motion!!!
person elementaldeity
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww, poor Severus, with a broken heart. Will it be alright? I can only wonder. That was acellcellent line, the last one.

elementaldeity
person Beatrice
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweet and sad with a hint of reconciliation. Love it, love it, love it!
person mele
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chapter twenty one - how poignant! bravo! quarky ol boy, so very good. a box of honeyduke\'s finest to you... but please update soon! aloha, mele
person Fran
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah!!! I was wrong... but some of the peices are finally fitting together... like herm\'s \'s dreams... I can\'t wait to read the next chappie... keep up the good work
person influenza1918
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I adore your Ron. Too often in fanfiction, he\'s just an oblivious little jerk. It\'s nice to see him with his insight, loyalty, and sense of humor intact.
person spaz141
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 19 - you Ron is great. Your killing me though let the Harry/Severus kiss Hermione already. I hate it when I\'m impatient, sorry. Thanks.
person LittleBird
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m glad that Severus and Harry have returnedt sat sad that this will signal the end (or at least a lull) in the Severus/Hermione romance. Here\'s hoping that it gets back on track soon!!