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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person LittleBird
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy your version of Ron. I love the fact that he and Severus have formed a friendship that looks like it will hold past the switch. Hope he has some matchmaking skills up his sleave!!
person zenia
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoy this story and how you made ron and severus friends :D
person spaz141
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What are you doing? I\'m all in a tizzy. Thanks.
person genrou
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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i actually did start to applaud when i had finished this chapter, and got 1.5 claps in when i remebered and then swore because my sister and nephew where napping next door. whoops. ^____________^
man i love ron. i absolutely love what you do with him and i adore his relationship with snape. im sooooooo incredibly happy with the outcome of this chapter. i grinned at so many moments from the \"mr. weasley\" to the \"but Harry was the only one who was completely happy.\" line.
oh man its just so bllody brilliant. and how they chatted till the tea was still cold and everything. i know im rambling but it was sooooooo good. and the last line and just everything. man, i could kiss you. but i dont know where you are so i cant.
man, im just so blissful right now. thanks.
person libco
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great great great! I love a smart Ron for a change. I am really enjoying this story.
person Brian
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the slightly Slytherin side of Ron. Being good at wizard chess just might finally pay off in the real world (aside from Sorcerer\'s Stone). And if you can be bribed by virtual chocolate, how bout a virtual space heater for your cold house? ~hands one over to her~
person jeanette
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaa, I want more. I am so looking forward to the developments as HOPEFULLY Hermione gets her brain in gear... There is NO way Harry is going to be able to pull off being \"Snape-Harry\", just as Snape really couldn\'t pull off being Harry; the difference is that Snape could \'attempt to dumb down\', Harry smarting up... not going to happen.

As always I enjoyed the next installment, and an even better comment, I enjoy re-reading fronm the start.

Jeanette
person spaz141
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What\'s Harry going to do now? What\'s Hermione going to do now? Oh my, what\'s Severus going to do now? Brilliant as usual, thanks.
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My heart weeps....
person influenza1918
schedule February 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t think I could ever grow d ofd of this incredible story.

The transition in this chapter seemed a bit abrupt, but I guess there was really no point in getting detailed about the switch back.