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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Ricky-Roo
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well done!!! Well done...
person RickyRoo
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I haven\'t even started reading this fic, but I just wanted to let you know that this sounds very, very interesting... I\'ll let you know what I think after a few chapters. ;) ~ Lara
person Emery
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:) sweet. (not the flavor, the slang ;) )
person PhoenixFeather7
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This has been a wonderful fic, made me misty eyed at more than one occation...
person Delana
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. This definitely goes in my \"Read Again\" folder. Keep up the good work as I can\'t get enough SS/HG fics.
person danabird
schedule April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was really a great story. Plenty of angst and romance, with dashes of humor thrown in. I particularly liked the cats - the convocation and their conversations are something I haven\'t seen before in fanfic (and I\'ve read a LOT of fanfic!) so, Kudos to you for originality!

And I\'m a sucker for a happy ending. :-D Thanks so much for your hard work on this story. I really enjoyed it!
person danabird
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Adriana recced ATT to me, and I\'m just now getting around to reviewing. *sorry!*

This is a very good story, and it\'s gotten better as I\'ve read more chapters. Along about the time you started mentioning in your author\'s notes how the story had gotten under your skin, I noticed a definite improvement on what was already a good fic.

\"He would go back to being friendless and alone, a penitent searching for absolution in the darkness.\" I love creative writing like this! :-D
person Stellar Snape
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! Bravo! What a beautiful ending to an equally beautifuory.ory. I have loved this from the beginning. You did a fabulous job tackling a challenge that most were unwilling to take on. Great characterization, excellent battle scene ( I find those quite difficult to write), and the lemons were quite refreshing. Wonderful job!
person Jana
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Bravo!
person mama wolverine
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The ending of this wonderful work has me rather weepy, which is rather inconvenient since I am at work. I am having trouble finding the words for this. You have created a universe complete with characters to care about, cheer for, snarl at and mourn. I\'m only sorry it\'s over. Brava!