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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! Oh excellent!! Ron and Snape friends!! I love it!!! Yes!!
person deblovesdragon
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Did I miss something? Didn\'t Severus share his memories of being Harry with Harry? Doesn\'t Harry know about Severus\'s feelings toward Hermione?
She must be very confused. Poor thing. But she is such a smart girl, with the dreams she has been having, she should figure it out soon.
I loved how Ron said Hermione was born 40 years old and had to pretend to be a teenaged girl.
Keep writing FQ. I know it will be great.
person aprilgrey
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another terrific chapter. I\'m so glad to see how this is going and I\'m eagerly awaiting the next update.
person Susan
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God Bless Ron! What a sweetheart! Great chapter. As an aside, had I known you take bribes, champagne and truffles would have been showered upon you. Sadly, they are pretend as well. Get another chapter up and I give you permission to indulge! ;-)

hugs
Susan
person Magdelena
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Truly charming! I\'ve rely fly found your fic and finally caught up. I love the way you\'ve developed all of the characters, especially Ron. He\'s matured quite as I would expect he would in canon. Your last line describes him perfectly (about him being a strategist). So many writers overlook that and make him out to be a big, dumb jock. I think he\'d be an excellent friend for Snape and bring out that side in Severus\' personality!!

Great job. I look forward to more!

Maggie
person ancientgirl
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! Ron to the rescue. I loved this chapter. So often I read fics where Ron is either not very intelligent or not very willing to befriend Snape, but this is very refreshing. I\'m looking forward to the next chapter.
person Chloe
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chloe again, i\'ve been gone and to come back to four chapters just makes me so excited. This last chapeter though is the one that makes me want to review so much. Ron maturing ometomething I appreciate and is not done enough in more stories. I love how they have mantained their friendship through this and I loved watching the wheels turn in Ron\'s strategic mind at the very end. Cannot wait for more!
~Chloe
person jessicat1982
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t tell you how much I you your story. most authors of the ss/hg genre tend to make ron out as the stereotypical hot tempered red head. I like the fact that you\'ve given him a dynamic personality and a role in getting the two of them together. I can\'t wait for another chapter. any chance things might start to heat up now?
person kerin
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love the way Ron isn\'t the retard most people portray him as, perhaps it comes with his ageing, but then again, 17 year old boys aren\'t renown for their maturity. anyhow, i\'m totally digging this story. keep it coming!!! no pun intended
person mele
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh gentle quark, fine sweet dear quark! to give severus a friend in ron made me cry! even if nothing changes in his life i\'m sure he\'d die a happy man with just that little piece of knowledge - that someone knows who he really is inside. can\'t wait to see how hermione finds out! wonderful story, update soon. aloha, mele