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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Red Writing Hood
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hummm...this it getting more and more interesting. I see a future here...I see a future where Severus is forced to care for ar kir kitty that has been wondering the halls...I see a transformed Hermione watching the care that Severus is aloud to show in private and I see a conversation between Severus and Ron being overheard...lol...keep going...I am curious as to YOUR way. LOL

Love it so far.

Red (A very bad seer...)

person Tarrin
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hermione a cat? *drops dead* thats so brilliant!!!! i can\'t wait for the next chapter!!! ^_~
person ancientgirl
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank Godt Snt Snape and Hermione have Ron and Minerva on their side.
person Imhilien
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter - angsty, sad and funny. It was good to see that Sev and Ron still want to be friends - I giggled when Ron launched back into his Quidditch
discussion after talking about Hermione.

Happily awaiting more....

Cheers
- Imhilien :-)
person jeanette
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So the cat is out of the bag so to speak. :)

You do realise that we are in awe of your story. Please continue, quickly.

Jeanette/ehlaana/JAPhdL and what ever other acronyms people came up with.
person WhiteLilac
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am not a fan of SS/HG fics, because it\'s so difficult to find original ones... but yours is. All the story is believable (the plot, and the way the different characters are reacting), I like your writing, everything!
Well, I saw you have a pretty wide experience whith fanfiction, and before that whith imagining stories for role playing games, so I understand better why I find this fic so good.
By the way, thank you for not picturing out Ron as a stupid boy, as it\'s always the case in that kind of fics... That was a nice surprise.
person sakhara291
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Convocation? Severus? Are you implying....... what I think you are?
person tifsuz
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hermione meets Cat nip Man? Can\'t wait!
person rtt
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dude. Slow down. Don\'t hurry. There were several grammar mistakes in the last chapter that weren\'t around in previous ones. Your story is excellent. Don\'t get in such a rush that you forget the basics.

person nesscafe
schedule February 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
When I first read the summery for this title I avoided it at all costs. I noticed today that there are quite a few reviews for this story and I had to read just to see what all the fuss was about. I thought it sounded boring! I was SOOOOOOO WRONG!!!! This is one of the best stories I\'ve ever read! I mean WOW! I\'ve never read a story where Ron and Snape befriend each other! I LOVE IT! I love that Snape kept his hands off her while he was Harry. I love that Minerva is going to play match maker! I loved the talk Crookshanks had w/ Silver Fur! OH MY GOSH! There are so many good parts I can\'t even name them all! I wish I had started reading this when you started it because then I would have been able to tell you each and every part I loved! Can\'t wait for more! I\'ll be sure to read and review every new chapter!!!