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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person e
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh oh oh oh i wait with bated breath for tomorrows update

xoxo
...me...
person VegasVWchiK
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m ng tng the story and the fast updates. My compliments to the author ;)
person Dame Niamh
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"Stalker.\" You certainly know Cats, having **six** of them! Interesting to see the human personality emerge in the Animagus form.

Blessings
Dame Niamh, who now has only one cat, the dear familiar of 17 years having gone to the place of the Tall Grass
person e
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i had a dream last night. the fact that i dream about fic is not something im proud of, but alas.

i dreamt that you updated the story with the convocation, and ended it. that as cats he explained and she said ok sounds good and then you wrote \"the end\"
i was very very upset. after all the amazing writing! after all the angst! how could you end it like that?! i reviewed, repeatedly, begging for a sequel or explanation or something. but i seemed to be the only one. everybody else was reviewing with wow great ending thanks. i was beside myself. i couldnt understand why you would end it so abruptly. there was no angst, no overwhelming joy. and i was very upset that you didnt even give us a little smut as a goodbye. it was like you got bored of writing, but instead of just abandoning it, left all the loose ends out in the open and finished with a \"but they got over it and were better\" like i did when i was little and spent all classtime writing a story just to run out of time and ideas for an ending. it was anticimactic and just upsettingly abrupt. so unlike the rest of your amazing fun angsty and somuchfun story.
it was a very bad dream.
i was slightly worried, then, when checking for your daily upda



thank you for not doing that to me, or any of your other ::loyal:: and ::devoted:: (i dont know about everyone else, but i surely am) fans.

do keep writing as well as you do. i couldnt bear it if you suddenly went ooc and stopped writing.

i love your story. i love your writing. i heart you immensely

xoxo
...,me...
person Kim
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I\'m really enjoying the friendship between Ron and Severus. I can\'t wait to see what Ron cooks up in his polt to get them together. Will he and McGonagall team up to do so? I can\'t wait to find out. The Animagi is a nice touch. I \'m looking forward to seeing how all that works out. Keep up the great work on this story and all your others. They are a pleasure to read.
person Imhilien
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter as always!

It was quite poignant to see that Dreamchild!Snape is his last piece of joy left.

Awaiting more as always....

Cheers
- Imhilien :-)
person Mel
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh! Poor dearest Severus!! I like Soot :-D I like I like I like!! A lot. I want to beat Harry over the head!! Gah!! He\'s a moron!! GET OVER YOURSELF!! HERMIONE LOVES SEVERUS!!! SEVERUS LOVES HERMIONE!!! RON KNOWS ALL!!! GO RON!!! Woah - heady stuff, argueing for Ron...
person Kiristeen
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmmm. I, too, wonder why Mrs. Norris reacted that way....feeling a bit threatened? LOL mayhap the thoroughly feline Mrs. Norris has an . . . interest in the feline version of our beloved potions master????? ::snickers:: Anyway this turns out, i\'m certainly looking forward to discovering it all.

Had to sniffle a bit there at the end. Losing hope isn\'t fun. :(

Kiri
person nesscafe
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! I am so excited for Hermione! I can\'t wait to read what happens while she\'s at the cat convocation! Hope you can keep updating this fast!!! BTW! I love the garden dreams and how Hermione\'s subconscious is trying to lead her to Snape! *sigh* Update soon!
person scifichick774
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely adore Crookshanks in this. :)