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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Droxy
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I have not reviewed but internet service can been infuriatingly slow, like taking several minutes to load a page off AFF. As a result I cant take 15 minutes to review, but today a miracle occurred and I have decent bandwidth. Please know I am out there and reading even though I don
person snapemeencanta
schedule February 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice fic, last chappie makes me want to kick Snape arse, he need to grew a little, emotionally speaking: Stop complaining and decide wich path he want to take: leave her or go for her. To much self pity.
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person Morrigan
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, I\'m really enjoying this story...Good job!

The only thing I could say to the last chapter is uh-oh, if there is attraction between two people, shifting into cat-form might _not_ be the discreet way to handle/hide it :) ...Cat\'s are not known for their inhibitions LOL.
Biting her neck indeed...
I\'m looking forward to the next chapter.
person Imhilien
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus - he\'s trying desperately in his own way to reach out to Hermione and it\'s not really working so
far. I hope she starts \'joining the dots\' soon....

Cheers
- Imhilien :-)
person Jana
schedule February 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'m hooked. More please.
person Louise
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay now I am just going to demean my self an beg pitifully!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE I NEED MORE MORE MORE MORE. I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS. POST MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE PLEASE.


Okay dignity in taters on floor. Mentally brushing myself off and trying to exit. La la la la la la......


More Please!!!

(Shamless begging, don\'tcha love it!)
person Deeble
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your cat names keep surprising laughs out of me. Chases Lint! It\'s reminiscent of \"Dances With Wolves\" but with monikers that cats probably would come up with if they were interested in naming themselves. (Of course, maybe they are, and do. How would I know?) \"He had managed to forget that at the moment he was a cat as well\" is also very snort-worthy. I\'m glad he spoke up for Hermione even though he was trying to be inconspicuous, but what in the world set Mrs. Norris against her? All the rules Hermione had broken at Hogwarts, perhaps? Or maybe she\'s just the only student to finish her animagus training quickly enough to be formally introduced to the rest of the felines?

I suppose Snape is speaking for some readers when he says Hermione should have figured things out already. But Ron clearly had more opportunities to see Harry-who-wasn\'t in action, and he didn\'t have the disadvantage of strong emotion to cloud his faculties. We know Hermione doesn\'t think as clearly whe the the throes of a crush -- coughLOCKHARTcough -- so I\'m willing to accept that she wouldn\'t solve this puzzle as fast as the one Snape made to protect the Sorcerer\'s Stone.

But back to cat names, you\'ve just given her a huge piece to the puzzle. Soot, indeed.

As for real life ... I\'m sorry to hear about the student. I hope she makes a full recovery.
person Helen
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s difficult to say this about Snape, but being named Soot is cute...
And Hermione as a \'kitten\' :D she\'ll need looking after...
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 25... I very much like how you wrote this chapter, the convocation was WONDERFUL!!! I really liked this part: The cat in him wanted to rub against her and maybe bite her lovely neck
person spaz141
schedule February 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t really like cats, but the cat tribe is very interesting. Damn hormones, I just wanted to cry at the end. Thanks.