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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Kiristeen
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeee! Things are finally coming to a head. : ) I love it. Of course, I\'m as on the edge of my seat as ever for it to keep on. LOL


Kiri
person Laura
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Loved that chapter! So glad that Hermione finally figured it out and that Minerva gave her some insight and support. Can\'t wait for Severus to find out that she does indeed love him. I hope you are going to continue this story until the happy ending occurs
person Red Writing Hood
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet. Well worth waiting for. I look forward to more when you are feeling better.

Get well soon, Hon

Red
person Severessa
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello Barrie, and welcome back to the land of the living! I am glad that you are feeling better and I hope that you continue to do so.

Your story is absolutely charming (as is all of your stuff). I especially enjoyed the fun Severus had as Harry -- the poor fellow has had so little of that. I hope that he is able to find a lifetime of pleasure in the coming chapters..... and with that, we will, too.
person tifsuz
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! Yes, yes, yes! *gets up a does happy dance*

Can\'t wait to see Severus react!

Get well soon!

Tifany
person Keket Amunet
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve been reading this story for a while, but I\'m not sure if I\'ve reviewed before. I\'m trying to get back into the habit of leaving a review.

I look forward to every update of this story. I\'ve had a wonderful time reading it and am always saddened that I have to wait when I reach the end of the page. I think you\'ve taken an interesting idea and done a good job of exploring it. The characters are not stereotypes of their in canon selves, and the story seems nicely thought out. I look forward to more.

Keket
person Rumours
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmm. Yeah. Thank you. :) I got my fix. *sighs contentedly* (for Now!) *glares*

I hope you\'re feeling better dear. You sure are writing brilliantly. :)

~ R :)
person jeanette
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
She guessed, she finally guessed.... Now what. In a fit of pique I hope that this story has MORE THAN ONE CHAPTER to go, but that it becuase I love that you are sharing your talent with us mere mortals (^_^).

Stay well and write more.

Lv Jeanette
person lovesnape
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is one of the best SS/HG stories i\'ve read so far. dying for the updates. keep it going!!
person Anon
schedule February 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! It\'s the first thing I check when I come online. Please please please update.