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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Ringbearer
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wish JKR wrote Ron the way you do... I like him in your story much better than in canon. This is so wonderful. Loved Hermione taking Harry down a few pegs, that was brilliant. Personally, I think that, given the size of your chapters, you\'ll need at least ten to resolve the story to satisfaction, but you\'ve gotta go wherever your muses take you. As always, I eagerly await the next chapter.
person spaz141
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry to read that you are ill, please rest and heal yourself. The chapter was brilliant as usuthe the slow dawning of Hermione was excellent. Nice little shock about Minerva and Albus. Thanks for writing even though you are ill, it is much appreciated.
person child of a fallen god
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I just read this thing through. I absolutely ADORE it! absitively posolutely! It\'s amazing, so utterly intricate in it\'s details, and submersively addictive. I want you to know I missed a college class for this thing. it\'s all your fault! LOL anyway, update, soon. Do something. Don\'t let it end there. . . please. It would be unbearable. Though quite a good ending. And dropping the megaton bomb on harry. That was hilarious!
person jordy
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sorry to hear that you are not feeling well. My 3 year old has athsma, and we\'ve been dealing with the same things as you for her. Luckily, we live in Southern California, and the weather\'s been nice and mild, so it hasn\'t been too bad. Not even a trip to the pediatricians! (Keeping my fingers crossed) ANYWAYS, on with the review... YEAY! I\'m so glad to see you have updated! I love that Hermione has finally put all of the pieces together, and isn\'t completely mortified. I\'m so glad that she is admitting her feelings, and not just to herself. She needs a good scratch behind her kitty ears!! ;-) Feel better, and update soon!
person Ringbearer
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! An update! I\'m so sorry you\'ve been sick. Hope you feel better. This story is so tremendously good; now she knows he loves her! I can\'t wait for the next update because this is the best SS/HG story I\'m reading right now. I hope you are well soon, and keep up the good work!
person spaz141
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Harry, but he deserved it. Ron - lol not prat Ron\'s are so refreshing. Thanks again for continuing to write while you are ill it is appreciated.
person otherside
schedule February 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\" It was good to be the King. \" oh my god, just when i was thinking, wow look at how great Ron is now, lol.
I have waited to read this story, and now i wished i hadn\'t because i had to read all 27 some chapters straight through! beautiful, well written story, the poetry makes me want to go out and buy a copy (and i\'m not big on poetry at all), and to look at my own significant other and wish for deep passionate letters from him, poor man :) (i love him anyway) but your snape is so very, well, snapey. (drools and begs for next chapter along with the masses. And sends get well soon wishes :)
person darnedchild
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope you start to feel better soon. Thanks you so much for taking the time to update while you were sick. The story is amazing. Poor Severus. I\'m g tog to find out what happens now that Hermione knows. And what will Severus do when Minerva tells him Hermione knows? Will the letters stop? Will she write back? So many questions!
person ancientgirl
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*jumping up and down like a crazy woman* I loved loved loved this chapter! That poem was incredible. And I\'m sooooo happy Hermione realized it was Severus the whole time! And of course the fact that Minerva is now on her side and willing to help her is even better. I can\'t wait for the next chapter when Severus finds out his feelings are going to be returned.
person deblovesdragon
schedule February 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
She knows, she knows (dancing around the room). Hallalujah, she knows!
And he will know her feelings soon too.
Hey FQ, could your credit the poems at the bottom of the chapters or in the following chapters. Or are they all from Cyrano?
Going to e-mail you a get well... don\'t want to cluck at you in your review section.
Cheers dearie!