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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Alison of the Faeries
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\"Some people go months without updating a story you know!\" While this is true, you spoiled us rotten by giving us daily updates for so long that we--and by we, I mean ME--feared your a)death, b)death of your computer, c)writer\'s block. All would have been equally horrific. Well, maybe you dying would have been worse, the other two can be overcome. Regardless, this chapter was as excellent as usual, nice and sweet. And nearly smut. Yay!
person Helen
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D
I can\'t think of anything better to express my feelings in this. I hate smut, but this was good!
And I hope you get better soon, and when you do don\'t you dare overwork yourself, once you can breathe again there are still other ways a cold can break out, like a very very itchy rash everywhere you can\'t reach...
*runs to the nearest tree*
person Vicki
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A Pekingese scolding a greyhound, How CUUUUTE! After I watched the Westminster Kennel Club Dog Show earlier this week I\'ve been nuts over that little Peek that won the toy group for the second year in a row. That short bushy-furred dog is such a great description of Hermione. Only in looks, though. If compared with intelligence, she would be a border collie or a standard poodle, both incredibly bright breeds. Tee, hee, I love dogs but cats are cool, too.
person e
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hoping your deathbed-induced muse turns into a happy and healthy muse.
in other words. hoorah new updates and yay your story, but first and foremost i hope you feel better.

woohoo for slight lust - y goodness in this chapter.

xoxo
...me...
person hope
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Take all the time you need to get better! Don\'t worry about us. And thankr thr the last two chapters. I\'m glad she finally knows.
Can\'t wait until she and Snape have to deal with each other face to face.
When they finally have that big discussion of their feelings you can still have him quote Cyrano....

\"Blessed above all others be the hour
When you reeredered to remember me,
And cao teo tell me.... what?\"

;)

Oh and don\'t forget that \"Read my letter with your lips\" line, now that she knows!

Ok, I promise I\'ll shut up now.
person Helen
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*chuckle*
Two chapters...
*grin*
What a way to start a day!
And this was one of those \'finally\' moments I\'ve been pining for so today might actually turn out well.
Go you and go Kate!
person ancientgirl
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay snogging! I knew she wouldn\'t wait. I just hope they can get to talking about their future soon. Wonderful chapter.
person heartnut
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is *wonderful*, you know that, right? Keep going with this stuff, and make the chapters longer if possible! The more to read at a time, the better! I love where you\'re taking SS/HG in this fic.
person Susan
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! What a sweet chapter. Still nice and slow, but we get a happy Snape. Well done :-)
person Rilla
schedule February 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was just beautiful. They way things have developed between Severus and Hermione and the way she has drawn him out of his usual personal is lovely. I love Ron\'s Lavender-colored haze too!