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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person buttercup
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aove ove letters. For some reason it felt like a spring day when I was reading this chapter. Thanks!
person Mama Wolverine
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Barrie - So glad you\'re back writing. What a wonderful story, but this chapter is very special. Thanks for all the wonderful worlds you\'re creating for us. To quote Nicole Kidman, \" ...because art is important.\"
person Droxy
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
re-chapt 27, 26

Besides all the accolades of great writing, this chapter told a great story. Great Minerva BTY.
I am assuming this is not the end? They HAVE TO KISS after all.
Alas, I am missing Sev and K
person spaz141
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay now I\'m hysterical. As always brilliant and thanks for writing.
person scifichick774
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness. Okay, you did warn us about the mush factor, but I still wasn\'t expecting that much. LOL! Sometimes it\'s nice to have fluff inserted here and there though. Looking forward to more.
person Tarrin
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely LOVE the letters chapter. its\'s such a brilliant and unique way to show how the characters feel about one another. it was truely worth the wait ^_^
person Jeanette
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww Mush. Those were so sweet, all that love right under Dumbledore\'s nose. I almost, what do I mean almost (I do), want to cuddle Severus and tell him it is alright, the last letter was so poinant (sp). Keep writing you work is great.

Jeanette
person sakhara291
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You were right about the insulin, but it was still beautiful enough to make my head spin.
person Deeble
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This slice of Cyrano is so apt for your chapter -- what a lucky coincidence, and further confirmation that itthe the perfect metaphor for the potions master. (\" \'midst the alchemy we\'re skilled in\"?? Holy cow.) The thought that \"twould be an outrage, ... To speak fine words that garnish vain love-letters!\" echoes his (terribly sad) pronouncement that any words of love he could write would be tarnished by decades of lying, first for evil and then for good. I hope he gets over it. Maybe he can invent off-the-wall pet names for Hermione that won\'t have any baggage attached. ;-)

I agree with Lavender -- Ron\'s letter is beautiful.
person Droxy
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love mush. Thanks for updating.