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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person FadingSlowly
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it\'s been a while since i\'ve been to this site, but the first story i looked for was this one! I LOVE IT! it\'s really beautiful and i love seeing Snape in a new light, instead of just the \"bad guy\" that lots of other people portray him as. thank you for giving me that chance. wonderful story.
person tifsuz
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww... I love Severus\' response.
person MaskedSoon
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thats not the end right?
person Laurence
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi,

You\'ve picked my favorite piece of theatre to bring Severus and Hermione together, how can I be more happy? Well, to be really honest, I think it sounds better with the rimes in french, but I\'m parti-pris... (if someday you want them in the original french, send me an e-mail... lol). Well congratulations for a job well done, I\'m very impatiently waiting to see how they\'re going to cope with graduation.

Thank you very much, hope your health goes better, keep writing ;o)

Laurence
Xmonsieur_de_bergeracX@hotmail.com (just remove the X\'s)
person crudedly
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wonderful story. :) I would love to tell you more, but actually i\'m only good at writing criticism and i can\'t find any with your story. So it will stand that statement all by it\'self, but it isn\'t any less true because of that. It\'s a wonderful story.
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just want you to know that I\'ve been squeeing as I read the last few chapters. Loudly. And version 2.0? I\'m having a little trouble considering how this story could be better, but I\'d really like to see it.
person IrishRavenX
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a very sweet chapter...it must be even harder to keep all the character voices seperate when writing a letter from their points of view. Thanks for the update, and have a happy V-day.
person excessivelyperky
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I was a nit-picker in my last review. Lovely, fluffy chapter, and lemon drops all round! Thanks. And I hope you\'re feeling better.
person Kim
schedule February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a great chapter! I love how you usedtersters to express the characters\' thoughts. Brilliant. I can\'t wait to read the next chapters.
person nesscafe
schedule February 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was such beautiful fluff! I loved every cottony, soft word! I don\'t know whose letter I loved most, though I have to say the letters between Lavender and Ron sure did make my heartttertter! You\'re a really talented writer! This whole story is just amazing!