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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 31... What a WONDERFUL look into these people!!! Both Ron & Harry showed maturity & Hermione & Severus both showed insecurity!!!

I really like how you wrote the conversations between Severus & Ron as wellSeveSeverus & Harry!!! I think it took a lot for Harry to go to him & tell him what happened!!! I know that part of the reason was that he cares for Hermione, but I think it went beyond that!!!

I am looking forward to seeing how Severus handles Hermione\'s thoughts & feelings that Harry started in her!!! Til chapter 32, deb >^..^<
person Ireth
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Harry deserves a good old bitchslap for that one! I can just imagine what Ron will do to him when he finds out what Harry did lol

Cheers go out to your roomie. Hope she\'s well :)
person GrrArrg
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!

This story was recommended to me by Zephyr, ages ago and I have only just got a chance to read it

I have just read it from the start right up to chapter 31 and I am hooked!!

It is amazing and I am loving it!!

Kisses
GrrArrg
person Deb >^..^< .
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 30... This chapter has a WONDERFUL mix of confusion, thoughtfulness, humor &ire!ire!!! I really do like how you are writing Severus in this story, very much him, but yet shaowing that he is ict mct more human than some people give him credit for being!!! I really can\'t wait until graduation so that Hermione can put his mind at ease!!! Til chapter 31, Deb >^..^<
person sakhara291
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hun, you have found one of the few real ways in which to ain ain Murphy.
person Laura
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet chapter, it was nice to read the private correspondence of the couples, gave insight to the depth of their feelings. Thank you for that. Can\'t wait for the next chapter, this is curly mly my number one fic to read, first thing I check when I get online is whether or not there is a new chapter up!
person Deeble
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It\'s so touching that Hermione\'s terribly embarrassing situation is an -- er -- terrible temptation for the potions master. (Must be love.) His musings, sad as they are, seem inevitable and I\'m glad you\'re addressing the issue of experience and his concern that she\'ll fall for someone less snarky in a few years. It\'s an improvement for him, really; after all, rather than brooding on tx-Dex-Death Eater thing, he\'s brooding on the age-gap thing. There\'s nothing he can do about the past, but the future will fix Hermione\'s youth and inexperience.

Will Mrs. Norris treat Hermione with more respect now? Will our heros get some face time in feline form? Will graduation hurry ureadready?? ;-)
person spaz141
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He is so insecure its almost sweet. Killing the mouse, yuck. I suppose that\'s how they do things in cat world. Thanks for the update.
person Kiristeen
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL, loved this chapter. : ) The hall scene from her and crook to her and Severus was a hoot.


Kiri
person excessivelyperky
schedule February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Here\'s to angst, dead mice, and a successful kill! Having watched my own cat spend endless hours of amusement in the front yard in search of a various lawn toys that run and squeak, I can see where Hermione could let herself go in the joy of the hunt, and then immediately regret it. But the joy of the hunt is something she\'ll need to know as a human, too. (Foreshadowing: Your Guide to Quality Literature). One wishes her a joyous hunt of oh, snakes. Snicker.