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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person dryade
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
gods, i LOVE the last line!!! don\'t we all wish for a place like this? normal walls tend to leave those ugly burns on my forehead! *grin* great story. very believable plotline and sooo in-character. you go!!
person sakhara291
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HARRY! You stupid-
I\'m going to enjoy the sex that comes from this, aren\'t I?
person nesscafe
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAWWWW! Poor Harry and Hermione. Men are stupid of coarse he didn\'t know that she would take that comment like that. And poor Hermione being a virgin in love w/ an experienced man. Is is too much to ask for another update today? I\'m a bit addicted to this story! *sheepish grin*
person ancientgirl
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I\'m glad Harry has realized what a putz he\'s been and decided to accept the fact Hermione and Severus are together. I\'m still loving the Severus and Ron friendship thank you so much for making it so wonderful. I can\'t wait for the next chapter.
person IrishRavenX
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\" Harry wondered if there was a special place in Hogwarts where he could rhythmically pound his head against a wall for a few hours. \"

That scene between Severus and Harry was priceless. I\'m still laughing. I think I\'ll be laughing for the rest of the day. My Tae Kwon Do master will understand, I\'m sure. *Frolics, the update was lovely*
person Tifsuz
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think we\'re going to get along just fine with the inner voice! lol

Love it as always
person Imhilien
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear, how embarrassing for poor Hermione! A good chapter though.

Cheers
- Imhilien :-)
person WhiteLilac
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t always review, but I check every day for your updates (almost never disappointed with your pace).

Sweet chapter, that made me grin all the time. Ron listening to a depressed Severus, and Harry panicking and running to Lavender (Lol)!
I love the way you picture Snape, just perfectst ast as I imagined him (well, I didn\'t imagine him with Hermione, but you write so well! And you just made it make sense, with that body change).

You describe quite nicely and accurately the psychology of the different characters, and they are believable; that\'s one of the reasons I like your story.

Thanks for it (and for the other fics. I started to read Sub Rosa, only because you wrote it, and I\'m loving it. I\'m readin bef before moving to the sequel, but I don\'t think I\'ll review it, because I don\'t know if you will get the reviews now it\'s finished. But I\'m sooo happy to know I have sooo much good material to read! -big, big grin-).
person Bambu
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I will add my glowing praise for your story to the scads of those who have come before. In my own defense, I only discovered the story this morning. Sigh. It\'s delightful, and the only problem I can find is that it\'s not complete. Heavy Sigh. ok fok forward to the resolution of your allergies, which all in our house are suffering from as well -- it\'s that SoCal air; and eagerly await your next installment.
person Helen
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Grr. I can\'t see ANY updates here even if I go to your profile page. *sigh* And I don\'t get emails from WIKTT either anymore, the place is just not what it used to be I feI feel uncomfortable with all the otness. So I miss important updates.
But it does have the positive side of readin many chapter at once and not having to wait for the next one, but then again the wait for the new oneS is longer too...

About importanyt matters: Glad that Harry seems to be getting some sense into that thick head of his. And I have to say that having refreshed my memory by rereading OotP again he is much more IC than most of the accepting and understanding Harrys you see. The same with Ron not being a stupid table leg.
Although I can\'t imagine Severus discussing quidditch to save my life. It actually makes sense when you think that he refereed that match in canon, but in fanon he is usually anti-quidditch and you rarely see anything else so that it has become something like \"You mean Snape actually hasn\'t been proven to hate quidditch in canon, not even a hint?\" thing.
The insecurity at the beginning of the chapter had completely dissapeared by the end? Huh? That was a str strange. But I soimehow get the image of Adult!Snape still being somewhat affected by the time he spent as a teenager and still has some of that in him... Or maybe I\'m just confused out of my mind...