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::giggle-snort::
Merlin, I don\'t think I\'ve laughed so hard at one conversation in a long time...And I don\'t know why I laughed so hard...It might be because it\'s past 1 AM and I\'d been reading fics for 4 hours strai but but I don\'t know...:)
::shrug:: But it was definitely worth reading about Harry and Sevvie talking without insulting each other to death...How rare and precious such conversations are...::smirk::
SOOO looking forward to Sevvie\'s damage control!! That ought to be interesting...

LOL Poor Harry. Trying to be nice, and make up for being a jerk, and goes and sticks his foot in it anyway. : )~ Sounds about right for a teenage boy.

I love this story\'s character development. Harry showed more maturity than normal in this chapter -- a little bit lihe lhe leap of logic Ron took to figure out \"Harry\" was Snape -- and (joy!) even when he backstepped a bit, he mopped up after himself. (As a side benefit, he\'s been knocked over the head with proof that his long-hated teacher cares deeply about his friend.) Snape always liking \"a field report before venturing into enemy territory\" is priceless, not to mention a subtle reminder that he will forever think like a spy. (I don\'t know what it says about him that he equates an emotional Hermione with the enemy. I suppose emotions of any sort besides anger are pretty foreign to the guy.)

Tea with Ron was also delightful. Your view of him has changed my opinion of the canon character ... I never detested him as some HG/SS shippers do, but it\'s easy to see him as one dimensional, especially because the movies reinforce that characterization. Your Ron is a reminder that the character has potential.

Love this chapter, incredible interactions.

That was a nice chapter. Hermione looking embarassed while Severus looks at her thighs... kinky.
Well, I can\'t wait for the next convocation and the reaction of mean Mrs. Norris. You\'re making me
wonder if Hermione would be able to recognize Severus in their animagus form.

Bye, I\'m eagerly waiting for the next chapter. A work well done, chap.

woo hoo! hooray for harry being an idiot. this said, of course, because harry is back on the non-hated side of the story. and its nice that all the main characters on on the good side. less angsty.
or more angsty, once you look at what the dunderhead actually said to the poor girl
oh do write more darling friendly quark!
both you and your dear beta are on my ::ooh ooh did t t get updated today:: list.
i send to you what i sent to her,
chocolate, valentines dayesque love, e-kisses, and a nice five star gourmet meal.
but only after you both write a few more chapters. encourage each other, dangit!
send your muses my love.
please keep up good work of great writing

xoxo
...me...

The last line made a really funny visual in my head. Harry beating his head against the wall, like Dobby in the 2nd movie. Was neat the way the light went off for Harry as well. Maybe Snape was in love. Well noone ever said he was the brightest bulb in the pack.
More soon please.

Holy Flying Fingers Batman! You ARE prolific.h toh to my delight. I think this story\'s just as good as SR and EPU; of course, I\'ve always been a SSHG shipper. But your humour is what makes your writing so appealing - I love Harry\'s ending thought and I\'ve felt that way many a time myself. I do hope you get to eat and sleep in between all your updating!

I will gladly, and with great malice of forethought happily provide Mr Potter with a large wall, covered in ten inch spikes that will play off-key bagpipe music in the MUSAK style just for him to beat his head against. To ensure the beating experience is perfect I will also add in a troup of Flatley Irish dancers (out of step), and myself, singing..... (something no sane person wants to hear: I \'ll even Fat hat him).

He told Potter don

Ooh, cliff-hanger, I can\'t wait to see what Snape does to comfort Hermione.