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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really, really loved your story, please keep them coming
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I usually don\'t review, but i had to say how awesome this story was, I couldn\'t stop reading it
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I compliment you on your ability to bring out the emotions in your readers. At a couple of points you almost had me crying. . . or laughing. . .or depressed. . . you catch my drift. . .
Anyway I wish you luck in all that you write!
^_^
Katt
Anyway I wish you luck in all that you write!
^_^
Katt
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June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok I am not done reading this yet but I just had to take a minute to review. I just finished chapter 24 and I have to say that the garden scene was fabulous. I was a Psych major and on my own I have done huge amounts of study on dream analysis and so throughout this story the dream sequences have been very interesting for me. There is so much emotion going on there and I am anxious to see where you go with it so I am sure I will review again once I am done reading your fic. I have truely enjoyed reading your very original story so far, its a wonderful and new way of doing the HG/SS pairing and I am very impressed.
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June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you so much for writing such an utterly beautiful story. It\'s perfect.
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May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I only just read this story and I really really like it :-) but I did just want to point out a couple of things...
MANY authors get this wrong, you are by no means alone. I guess it works differently in the US or something, it\'s the best explaination I have for such a common pair of errors. (a) In her 7th year, assuming Hermione started at Hogwarts at the usual age (11) and not early because of being so damn clever, she turns *18* in September. We KNOW this from JKR herself. She has specifically revealed in interviews when Hermione\'s birthday is. So she isn\'t 17, she\'s 18. And (b) maybe it was just Snape being, well, Snape, but technically, even at 17, Hermione is an adult in the Wizarding world. He said \"nearly an adult\". And in muggle Britain 16 is the age of consent, so the only issue for Snape is the teacher/student thing. Still a barrier and worth using for angst etc.
And secondly, cats do see in colour, just not as many colours as humans. Most mammals see colour but many are colourblind, ie can\'t differentiate between green and blue. It also depends on breeding.
Ok, sorry but I had to get it off my chest. I have really enjoyed this fic and am following ADSC (firmly fixed on my favs list), I think you\'re a really gifted writer! Your humour is spot on and you explore the emotions of the characters so well. Every chapter is crafted to move the story along and you have me laughing and tearing up regularly. A fabulous story :-)
MANY authors get this wrong, you are by no means alone. I guess it works differently in the US or something, it\'s the best explaination I have for such a common pair of errors. (a) In her 7th year, assuming Hermione started at Hogwarts at the usual age (11) and not early because of being so damn clever, she turns *18* in September. We KNOW this from JKR herself. She has specifically revealed in interviews when Hermione\'s birthday is. So she isn\'t 17, she\'s 18. And (b) maybe it was just Snape being, well, Snape, but technically, even at 17, Hermione is an adult in the Wizarding world. He said \"nearly an adult\". And in muggle Britain 16 is the age of consent, so the only issue for Snape is the teacher/student thing. Still a barrier and worth using for angst etc.
And secondly, cats do see in colour, just not as many colours as humans. Most mammals see colour but many are colourblind, ie can\'t differentiate between green and blue. It also depends on breeding.
Ok, sorry but I had to get it off my chest. I have really enjoyed this fic and am following ADSC (firmly fixed on my favs list), I think you\'re a really gifted writer! Your humour is spot on and you explore the emotions of the characters so well. Every chapter is crafted to move the story along and you have me laughing and tearing up regularly. A fabulous story :-)
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May 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What an utterly exquisite story! I loved every word of it!!! Bravo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please, write another one with Hermione and Severus!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great story. There were moments when I didn\'t really get into it...such as the battle. I just feel students wouldn\'t be fighting and it wouldn\'t be staged at hogwarts...but eh, that\'s how i see it. Other than that I think the story was fanfuckingtastic. I look forward to reading more of your works.
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, just finished Chpt. 8 and I LOVE LOVE LOVE the fact that Snape as Harry gets to totally belittle Draco and on top of that....BOO!?! That was just brilliant. Off to read more.
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February 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cyrano! I\'ve read that passage more times than I care to admit. I knew it was familiar, but Paris tipped me off, too. And you threw a Cyrano reference in earlier. That is my favorite plot, that kind of love triangle. Now i\'m off to read more.