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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person Hungarian Horntail
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a wonderful story! I\'m pleasantly surprised that a challenge managed to inspire such a complex story. I loved your treatment of the cats\' society. It\'s the first time I read a story where the author has actually thought about what it means for an animagus to turn into an animal, having to fit into a community.
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::adores::
person excessivelyperky
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, brave new chapter, that has such snogging in it! (fans self vigorously) Looking forward to when Harry gets hit by the Big Clue Brick, though I suspect he\'s feeling the edges of it already.

Yum!
person WhiteLilac
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sweet chapter.
But, I don\'t know why, I have that weird apprehension about the last line you wrote. Maybe the immediate future is not going to be so rosy glowing, with Voldemort around, and the NEWTs coming (just kidding here!)... Or maybe I\'m just being paranoid.
person Rumours
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
eeep!!!!!!!!!
person Shiv5468
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m all bitter and jealous of the number of reviews you\'ve got. In fact I very nearly didn\'t leave on - you\'d hardly notice it was missing amongst all the rest.

Delightful story, bloody well written, and still sulking that it\'s so good.

Couldnt you write a really duff chapter just to make me feel better????
person Deeble
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I giggled at the idea of a half-tamed Snape -- he\'s so tightly controlled, though it\'s too true that he doesn\'t take well to control exerted upon him by outside forces -- but this passage took my breath away:
person Rilla
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so lovely. I enjoy every single chapter. This line, \" Of course, Hermione
person Vanilla Free
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ron and Lavender are getting too comfortable. I have the feeling you\'re planning on doing something to them. I can\'t wait to find out!
person sakhara291
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that is.... that is the line between true love and a childhood dream.