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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person scifichick774
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so wonderful to come home to a few chapters I hadn\'t read. I like that you\'re incorporating Draco back into the fic, and I\'m thrilled that you\'ve paired up Hermione & Snape\'s cat forms. More soon please.
person Deeble
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, repressed passion -- frustrating for the characters but great for plot tension. You describe it so well, that feeling of acute awareness ... the magnetism analogy is perfect.

Snape as agony aunt is amusing but also a touching reciprocation of Ron\'s earlier advice, plus \"it was in the shades of gray that life was lived\" is such a nice, subtle reminder that this is mature!Ron we\'re dealing with, despite the momentary wine-fueled leave of senses.

\"Sometimes the best friend to have was a Potions Master\" -- amen.
person ancientgirl
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man I feel so bad for Hermione. She\'s got this wonderfully romantic and sexy man and she can\'t show him off. I\'m also still loving the Snape/Ron friendship. I\'m also wondering since Severus and Hermione can\'t cuddle and be seen together as a couple as humans, what\'s to stop them from taking a stroll as cats. I think they would be so cute all cuddled up in a bundle together.
person sakhara291@hotmail.com
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am appalled at Ron, completely sympathetic to Hermione (having often been there myself) rooting for Severus and making sure Harry (and my marvelous author) both realize that a relationship that goes as such, you will be kissing goodbye.
person hope
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
\" Black and white were clear and easy colors but they were also very limiting; it was in the shades of gray that life was lived.\"

I love you! What a way to so succinctly sum things up! :D
person IrishRavenX
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If wishes were Horses....it you leave it hanging out there like that, I am tempted to add something to it. Hehe. *mutters to self* Not that one, its not appropriate. Updates = Happy Raven!!! Thank you!!!
person Shinigami
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm... I almost forgot about Harry and Ron. Got too distracted.
Although I would love to see Dumbledore try to avoid an open-palmed
smack from an irritated Hermione.. perhaps Minerva would do.

About the booming friendship between Ron and Severus... mmm...
very interesting, wonder how Ron w mak make it up to Lavender.

*snickers* Too bad Hermione can\'t boast of her \'boyfriend\', too bad the other
girls don\'t notice the dark, broody, sexy albeit snarky Potion Master... I think she
better kill Voldemort and then threaten Dumbledore... it\'s much effective
of a death threat when there is already an example laying around... just kidding.

Damn... almost forgot about the other students there.. especially Neville... what\'s
the deal with Neville being so much like Frank? Just a past Deatheater mistake?
Or were they friends?

Anyway, I\'m looking forward to your next chapter.
person Gabriele
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
God is this a lovely story! I like this plot more than the time turner fics. And mademade a wonderful story of it. Its much more nasty for dear Severus to be in the body of his Nemesis
person excessivelyperky
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another yummy chapter! And Harry is actually putting his brain in the \'ON\' position--surely the age of miracles is not yet past!

And I think \'Curiosity\' suits Hermione down to her extremely well-manicured paws. Heh.
person GrrArrg
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh two new chapters!!

Both excellent. I am loving the cat tribe so much, as a cat owner myself!!
Good stuff, more soon please?
Kisses
GrrArrg