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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person jordy
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What What WHAT???!?!?! You just Had to end it there, didn\'t you??? I get all wo up up about everything, you almost kill hermione, you make Severus risk his life saving her, revealing himself and throwing their plans for killing Voldemort out the window, had you end it THERE???!?!? Oh I hope that next update is soon...very soon. No fair!! I am waiting ever so patiently, though. Okay, so thats a blatant lie. I have no patience. You\'re making me to to bang my head against my desk. This is almost as bad as waiting for book 6...
;-D
person trulymad
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
From one cliff to the next! AHHHHHH! *cries*
person White Lilac
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! was was... wow!
I may send a longer review later, but for now, I\'m at lost for words!
person Gwennavierre
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::lets out breath:: I have fingernail marks on my face!! PLEASE HURRY WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!
Thank you! :-D

Hugs,

Gwen
person Gabriele
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
After having made it to chapter 31 I H.A.V.E. to tell you again how much I adore this story! Its so lovely and easy to read (without g shg shallow or simple minded) - its just a perfect, wonderfully written story!
The cat scenes are incredible: the names of the cats, the scene where Hermione caught her first mouse (Ha!), the hierarchy, the looking down of the real cats on the animagi (very entertaining!) - the whole thing its heaven for a cat lover!
And I also like how you develop the characters: your Ron is wonderful (I too see him more mature than as a sidekick), your Severus is adorable, your Minerva has much more feeling for interpersonal relationships than the all-knowing headmaster (I too see them as a married couple). Harry grew up in your story and that he is finally together with Ginny is heart warming. And I also like that you gave Levander a little bit more room than only being girly-background in this school.
I am curious how you will develop the whole thing up to the final battle and I hope they all will come out without too much harm.
Thanks for sharing this gem with us!
person Deeble
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Positive-thinking man, Snape is ... ;-) I hope you have a better fate in store for him.

Glad to see humor woven into this tense situation -- \"the change from seven pound cat to hundred and twenty pound girl made an impression on him\" is a great groan-worthy pun -- and the description of Voldemort\'s unjust (and unreal) handsomeness is a nice aside. (Plus a nice parallel with Snape, good though greasy. Of course it\'s hard to think of him as ugly now that Alan Rickman is inextricably fused with the character. Mmmm ... whoops, sorry, back to reviewing.)

Your \"domestic\" scene is affecting. Snape must really love her if he\'s willing to let her help him at a time of weakness. (And the fact that he lets Ron and -- gasp -- the famous Mr. Potter stick around to watch is a sign of strong friendship, or at least, in the latter case, a strong ability to endure irritation ...)
person Kiristeen
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeek!! Excellent chapter, but pleeeease don\'t make us wait to long after that extremely evil cliff you made us fall off of. LOL


Kiri
person Jenny
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
But...but...Sevvie won\'t actually die will he? *grows stern and digs through junk for pitchfork and torch* I\'ve invested way too much feelings and tintointo your fic - so just in case...
person ancientgirl
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please please please update this soon!!!! Great chapter! I\'m keeping my fingers crossed, Severus has been through sooooo much he\'s got to come back in one piece.
person TheGreyLady
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa... didn\'t know there was more of this here! I love it even more now that I know there won\'t be any... kitty porn (god, that was bad...) You rock. Keep it up!