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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person deblovesdragon
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Action packedrie!rie! The ghost of Slytherin, dampeners for the wards, Ginny\'s bravery, cat Severus, Tonks and Moody flanking Harry, and let\'s not forget noble Ron and ingenious Hermione.
Very exciting.

Please don\'t let us hang for long. So many love this fic. (Me included.)

Cheers.

PS how are the cat drawings coming along?
person nocturnus
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My computer collapsed, so I was off line all week. Was nice to come back and find this amazing battle.
person Estrilda
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love this story - it just keeps getting better. The discriptions in Chapter 37 were amazing and Salazar was a terrific addition to the plot. I finally figured out that when you update a chapter at LnLS there is usually a new one (farther along in the story) here as well. Thank you.
person Brian
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW...great chappie!! But what about E Pluribus Unum???
person droxy
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
still here!

Great story, but you knwo that..
person Susan
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, I\'m nice and tense now. I hope the next chapter is coming soon. I REALLY need to know what happens next. :-)
person jordy
schedule March 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, trying this for the second time...My first review dissapeared when I got up to answer the phone, and my 3 year old climbed into the chair and \'wanted to push buttons like mommy\'. Anyway, you have to update soon, before my head explodes! You left me with more questions than answers! *Feeling the pressure on the inside of my skull* ...you don\'t want my kids to be motherless, do you? PLEASE update soon!
person AC
schedule March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! I love it!

I really hope Snape doesn\'t die...

I like how you\'ve made Ron and Snape friends. This is the first time I\'ve read a fic with the two of them acting civil towards the other, and I love it.

Keep writing! :-)
person tifsuz
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! So glad you didn\'t leave us hanging there!
person Laura
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!!! That was very intense, and sad. What a relief when Severus grabbed her. I can\'t wait for the next chapter to see how it all works out. Now I must go read your new fic;-))