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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, you already know how I feel about this story, but this chapter was just perfection! I swear, when I get the balls to write my own fic, I am going to BEG you to beta for me. You did just the right thing by postponing lemons until later. Hermione needed strong comfort, not a shag. ;-) It also lets us see how much hurt they have all suffered and how much healing still needs to take place. I really respected you taking the time to show that. Thanks again for a wonderful read.
Hugs
susan
Hugs
susan
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Recent chapters have been quite dramatic and it was only natural
that Hermione would eventually crack - I do love the image though
of Severus gently holding a sleeping Hermione. Lovely.
Happily awaiting more...
Cheers
- Imhilien :-)
that Hermione would eventually crack - I do love the image though
of Severus gently holding a sleeping Hermione. Lovely.
Happily awaiting more...
Cheers
- Imhilien :-)
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. You nailed it. Hermione\'s breakdown was realistic, and expected, the way she was holding everything in. I have also been through a very traumatic event, not war, but the death of my child and the similarities are astounding. Nightmares, denial, exaustion, flashbacks to things you could never change. This chapter made me cry. Then at the end it made me smile, because there is always letting go and forgivness at the end of the nightmare if we are to grow and move on. Well done as always, I\'m thankful that you continue to update so frequently and I will be sad when this story ends.
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Made me tear up!
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for making my grin stupidly right after waking up.
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh girl you are good at this battle thing. You shuold consider writting an action fic.
Love the Draco escene.
Love the Draco escene.
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just realized there was a chapter 39. It was sensible, love the way you work the aftermath of the victory.
As for Severus...I wan\'t that one for my self. So supportive!
Harry/SS interaction was faboulous, quite few lines and completly trace it.
As for Severus...I wan\'t that one for my self. So supportive!
Harry/SS interaction was faboulous, quite few lines and completly trace it.
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is so great. Really liked this last chapter. How Severus came to comfort Hermione when she finally opened up.
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your Fiction rocks, and I am not worthy. Kait xx
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me again. SNIFF! That was beautiful! I\'m so glad you keep the characters in what I see as canon - it\'s always harder to read fanfics when there are implied personality transplants. MORE!