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Nhat\hat\'s what I call sex!

This is such a fabulous story...I love it. I have been holding off reading it because I usually don\'t read WIP...I hate waiting for the next chapter, I\'m so impatient, but your e-mail to LnLS about lemons made me read tonight. And I loved it. I read the whole thing in one sitting, and now I have to get up for class in 3 hours. Fabulously done, can\'t wait for more.

Ahhhhhhhhh.

Your 12 hours of struggle for these last 2 chapters was definitely worth it. Such passion. Really, really great story!

I love Snape\'s small, shy smile -- it\'s a great visual reminder of his insecurity and how he\'s essentially being taken by surprise every time he\'s appreciated. It\'s a tricky thing making the man snarky AND sweet and make it seem completely in character. His desire to go slow shows his care for Hermione and his famous control over himself, and Hermione\'s response -- hurry up already! -- is a great humorous touch.

Though there was one bit of nonsense in here: \"you would think they were part of a bad novel written by an unimaginative writer.\" Never!

Are you nuts?? You were worried about how your \"lemons\" would turn out? Honey, you can make me lemonade, lemon meringue pie, hell - anything with lemons on it as long as they taste (look) as good as these do in this chapter. Thanks for the update - you make my day! Now hurry - update the other fic as well. Pretty please?? ;)

Chapter 41 and 42 - It must be nice to have such an open minded mother. Very nice build up for the pay-off in the next chapter. The visuals of the rooms breath-taking. I never thought of Severus\' time with his parents to be pleasant, that was a nice change of pace. The lemon was beautifully written, very few first times are that wonderful - its nice to imagine in fantasy world that such experiences can be so positive. Thanks for the very long and slow build up with the most amazing lemon delivery.

*sniffles* you made me cry again!

are you trying to kill me?!?!??

updaate again soon, please. or i will die. honestly. death = going to long without another update.
my life depends on you, friendlyquark. godspeed.

xoxo
...me...

Totally awesome. Good way to end the chapter. The writing is excellent and professional. Thank you so much foring ing the time to tell this part of th story rather than just going on to the lemons and all that jazz. It would have ruined the story if you hadn\'t told what happened in the aftermath of the battle with publicity, etc... GOOD JOB!