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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ah man...i never really like it when it seems all the main chacters find love in a short amount of time...
and hey whatever happened to the no touching til graduation rule?
and hey whatever happened to the no touching til graduation rule?
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i know its not your work but i really like the line \"A rose-dot on the \'i\' of \'adoration\".
as for the letters- the best one in my opinion is ron\'s. and i couldnt help but notice all the \"I\'s\" in harry\'s.
as for the letters- the best one in my opinion is ron\'s. and i couldnt help but notice all the \"I\'s\" in harry\'s.
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March 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed your story VERY much, youre a ly wry writer. There are, however two tiny factual errors that need fixing.
1)Hermione\'s patronus is an otter, not a tiger and
2)Draco is \"the ferret\" not \"The weasel\"
Other than that, fabulous!
1)Hermione\'s patronus is an otter, not a tiger and
2)Draco is \"the ferret\" not \"The weasel\"
Other than that, fabulous!
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am probably very late to the party, but this is absolutely wonderful. It\'s witty, well written, deeply involving (I have read the whole thing in one go - it\'s now 7am), and very touching. The-tim-time element is particularly good - although it is short, given the goal of the story, it gives enough that the reader is lost in the overwhealming \'survival instinct\', then the despair that comes later is something that I could feel, plus it gave it realism.
What else can I tell you ... Well, yourself and other talented fan-fic-ers have made HG/SS something I once despised something I\'m now fond of. I\'m glad that it wasn\'t free, as too many authors overlook the price ove ive in these kinds of situations. And as for the original \'rules\' of the fic, I think you managed to smash them all and fit them in wonderfully (with the exception of the \"freudian\" line, but that was bound to be a deal-breaker ;) )
I have bookmarked you and look forward to reading more of your fics ... but not right now, cos I think I need to get some sleep and have lemon-flavoured dreams of Snape.
What else can I tell you ... Well, yourself and other talented fan-fic-ers have made HG/SS something I once despised something I\'m now fond of. I\'m glad that it wasn\'t free, as too many authors overlook the price ove ive in these kinds of situations. And as for the original \'rules\' of the fic, I think you managed to smash them all and fit them in wonderfully (with the exception of the \"freudian\" line, but that was bound to be a deal-breaker ;) )
I have bookmarked you and look forward to reading more of your fics ... but not right now, cos I think I need to get some sleep and have lemon-flavoured dreams of Snape.
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March 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Words escape me! A lovely chapter.
Cheers
- Imhilien :-)
Cheers
- Imhilien :-)
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March 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good GOD!!!!!!!!! *whispers* Thank you! *cries*
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
:D
I would leave you a long, glowing review, but I think you\'ve rendered me speechless as well. Fantastic job. :)
I would leave you a long, glowing review, but I think you\'ve rendered me speechless as well. Fantastic job. :)
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well...wasn\'t that just worth the wait. So very glad my husband is home today. LOL. Well done. Not even going to bug you for an update. :-)
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
An absolutely wonderful pair of chapters. The climax was very well written. (pun intended). Thank you so much for posting them together.
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March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, a chapter (o.k., two chapters) that have me earning my nom de plume!
Hot, steamy, unbelievable!
Dang, woman, that was an unbelievable moment for our couple, rightly deserving of the longer-than-usual posting! I hope there\'s happiness and relatively smooth sailing; these two have endured quite enough just to get to where they can be completely themselves and completely together.
Now, off to bed with you; tomorrow is another day (fiddle dee dee!).
Hot, steamy, unbelievable!
Dang, woman, that was an unbelievable moment for our couple, rightly deserving of the longer-than-usual posting! I hope there\'s happiness and relatively smooth sailing; these two have endured quite enough just to get to where they can be completely themselves and completely together.
Now, off to bed with you; tomorrow is another day (fiddle dee dee!).