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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person dave gerecke
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What a great story
I\'ll read what ever you write.
I look for your stuff and have have read all that you\'ve written so far and will continue to do so.
dave
person Moaning Myrtle
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\'m grinning like a loon at this chapter -- it\'s an unequivocal and unapologetic happy ending! Yea!!!! And I love how you wrapped up so many loose endings (the garden, Snape\'s childhood including burying the nasty old biddy great-aunt, the cat) and did it all with great affection.

Happy sigh.

Now, get yourself and your roomies healthy, dang it! You\'ve got some more work to do on a few other fics out there.... ;P
person deblovesdragon
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The garden is in full bloom. Ahhhh. This is just so lovely.
Barrie, the epilogue has to be a good one. To finish up such a wonderful story.
(sigh)
Cheers dear!
person Droxy
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh what a sweet romc hac happy ending!
Great story, writing, etc. Glad to hear you are better now. I really like the dream sequence and the garden.
I\'d say you nailed the polylove challenge as the winner.

India govt has shut off access to all Yahoo User groups, so no WIKTT...

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person spaz141
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 42 - just lovely *sigh* only in fiction. Wonderful story. Sorry to read you\'ve been ill, thanks for updating. I can\'t wait until tomorrow, but then again, that will mean that its over *sigh*
person genrou
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hi, im back to this fic. i backtracked to where ron tells \"harry\" he knows he is snape. but this chapter definately made me fall in love with it once again. i wish i could express how happy and how much i love how ron still has his chats (over tea and bisciuts no less) with snape commiserating on harry\'s faiults. ^__________^ my god i adore those moments.
person genrou
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
as mch as i love this fic, i must admit these cat things wig me out. maybe its because i really dislike cats and my older keeps saying i act like one but its still there. bt i admit its making sen sence as it goes on. and i really like the name soot.and i of course like how ron is frustrated over harry\'s unwillingness to look past his block of what he deems truth.
person genrou
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ah and the poetry is another thing. i can be fond of poetry depending. but i could never see snape as the type to write it. this fic though is an exception given the source he cites it from and the circmstances of this fic and of course most importantly that he didnt write it himself.
but ewww albus and minerva. that will always get me, esp since yo have thier true age differnce...ewww 80yrs.
person genrou
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh man, i love hermione. the way she shot harry down. and then ron, he rocks. and man when they were talking about the ss/hg relationship in front of harry and making hm disguisted ^__^
person genrou
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ah man...i never really like it when it seems all the main chacters find love in a short amount of time...
and hey whatever happened to the no touching til graduation rule?