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for A Terrible Temptation

by Barrie

person genrou
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay! finally someone is doing this challenge. i was at wikkit the other day looking over the challenges and thought this one sounded the niftiest. im happy to say that this one is off to a good start. it is well written and i cant wait to see what you have in store. please write more soon thank.
person Gelsey Greeneyes
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, a great start. The first chapter had me laughing so hard, my roommate must have thought I was having a heart attack or something. Please update soon!
~Gelsey~
person Dawningskies
schedule January 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great beginning! I can\'t wai see see how things progress from here. As always, it\'s a delight to read fanfics that grammatically well written as well as keeping in canon with the characterization. Long live Snarky Snape!
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow Barrie, another story. Cool. I can\'t wait to see where you take this.
person Kiristeen
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I saw the summary and just *had* to read. : )~ I love the stories where one or another of the characters has to walk a mile in someone elses shoes. I have to say from the beginning I saw, I\'m *really* looking forward to your take. Can\'it tit to see more.


Kiri
person Brian
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HURRY I WANNA SEE THE DURSELYS GET THEIRS!!! HUUUUUURRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Zephyr
schedule January 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG you can NOT leave that there... oh please oh please post another chappie!!!!
person Cmdr. Gabe E
schedule February 2, 0000 at 12:00 AM
WHOA O.O!!! that was an interesting chapter O.O! it was rather intriguing seeing Harry act like Snape. and the conversation between snape and hermione was well-done too ;). heheh...looks like ron and mione will have to be used to harry acting like that from this point on ;)!